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Tempest

Twosome at loggerheads.
            Tempers flare now and then!
      The referee nowhere...

 To be found; good heavens!
                     Tempest in a teapot.
      Trouble in paradise; 

  The state of their union.



Submitted for...
Pleiades T Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Kim Merryman
Syllables checked at www.howmanysyllables.com
Date written: 04/25/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Merryman Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 8:16 AM
A clever, creative depiction of "tempest", Edward! I loved it! Congrats on your 1st place win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M
Ibeh Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 12:02 PM
Thank you so much for my placement and congrats, Kim:-) Most appreciated.
Kendrick Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 12:38 PM
Very descriptive winner in this Pleiades T contest. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
Ibeh Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 2:14 PM
Thank you very much, Sara:-)
Mitra Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 12:11 AM
So true Edward....Congrats on your win...do take care :)
Ibeh Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 3:02 AM
Thank you, Carol:-) Have a blessed day!
Richards Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 9:49 PM
Some relationships seem to thrive on clashing tempers. Congratulations on your win, Edward :))
Ibeh Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 3:02 AM
True indeed! Thank you, Suzettel:-)
Alex Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 9:46 PM
Congratulations!
Ibeh Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 3:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj:-)
Seeker Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 8:11 PM
Amazing write, Edward! Congrats on your win!
Ibeh Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 8:23 PM
Thank you so much, Seeker:-)
Roper Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 7:48 PM
Beautiful Pleiades, Edward, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Ibeh Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 7:52 PM
Thank you so much, Eve:-)
Pettit Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 1:47 PM
Your work inspired me to write one of my recent submissions titled "Prospero" You have a good write here.
Ibeh Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 2:15 PM
Thank you, Robert:-) I'm glad you found this poem inspirational. I'll check out your poem, "Prospero"!
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