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Telling Me To Fly

Grief visits me in the dark of the night I have lost you and you're out of sight You are my friend, like family Now you're gone, I just can't see Dark, so dark, I must march through With thanks for all my time with you Our laughter, fun and understanding We shared so long, was outstanding There were others, no chance for goodbye Now you are on the list, as I try To keep going, feeling aftershock To fly alone, but to feel the flock Of birds that soar across the sky I hear you above, telling me to fly Heidi Sands 11/29/23

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Date: 12/5/2023 5:25:00 PM
A very moving notion of flying and flight, Heidi, wrapped in this heartfelt tribute. Kudos, Gershon
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/6/2023 5:39:00 AM
Thank you very much my friend. I hope you have a beautiful day! ;)
Date: 12/2/2023 8:32:00 AM
So sad when we lose a loved one, but we cherish the memories, A poignant verse Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/3/2023 2:35:00 AM
Hi Joseph. Yes it is. Thank you very much :)
Date: 12/2/2023 2:25:00 AM
Hello Heidi..My comisserations on your loss.' May your recovery go well.' All blessings in Jesus.'
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/3/2023 2:35:00 AM
Thank you very much Joe. Prayers are answered and I can walk much better without the cane . I hope all is well. Blessings :)
Date: 11/29/2023 7:43:00 PM
A wonderful yet sad write. Sorry about your friend. It is hard. I lost a friend on Nov 11. Get well fast... Have a great/wonderful day writing away...........
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/29/2023 9:43:00 PM
Thank you Paula. I am sorry for your loss. Take care. Blessings. :)
Date: 11/29/2023 10:26:00 AM
Hello Heidi, It is hard to lose a friend. through death. I have lost many friends through death. As of today i still miss them. So i know how you feel. We must remember them in our hearts. Hugs. Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/30/2023 3:14:00 PM
Hello Heidi, Yes it is hard. We must remember the good times we had with them. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/29/2023 12:12:00 PM
Yes it is very hard. Thank you Darlene :)
Date: 11/29/2023 5:59:00 AM
A touching write, my friend. Memories sadden the present--missing someone special. Take care, Heidi. Time does heal.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/29/2023 6:39:00 AM
Thank you so much Vijay :)
Date: 11/29/2023 5:47:00 AM
So sad, Heidi. Beautifully written but still so sad. Grief is an emotion that no one wants to visit. Be well!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/29/2023 6:39:00 AM
Thank you very much DT :)
Date: 11/29/2023 12:04:00 AM
Quit an emotional write Heidi, losing someone close to you is devastating. Hope you're well on the road to recovery. Just out of hospital myself, I had spinal decompression surgery. Just taking it easy now at home. Tom
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/29/2023 5:32:00 AM
Thank you Tom. I appreciate your comment. I hope your recovery goes well. Prayers for your healing. I walked with my dog yesterday for the first time without the cane. I still gave bone issues, but I am taking vitamins and eating healing foods. One step at a time.
Date: 11/28/2023 10:11:00 PM
This is so heartfelt and touching, and well expressed about grief and reminiscing how close one was to you, its never easy losing loved ones. I felt this poem strongly. I love the rhymes too here. And the ending the most, soul hitting, sorry for your loss and sending you light today and always
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/28/2023 10:33:00 PM
Thank you very much :)

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