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Tell Me You Miss Me

An emptiness envelops my whole world while a deluge of tears threatens to start. And as we drift apart in rough waters, a river of sadness flows through my heart. With every molecule of my being I long for the gentleness of your touch. And I've cried every night since you left me, it's hard to believe my heart hurts so much. I'm in a quagmire of loss and despair, abandoned to the fickle whims of fate. And I will give you all my tomorrows if you return today, it's not too late. Tell me you miss me; don't let our love die, and we will start over, or at least try.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/4/2018 8:39:00 AM
A nice sonnet, Emile. Very touching.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/4/2018 9:04:00 AM
Thanks Subimal, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/3/2018 4:48:00 PM
Wow, what a direct straight-from-the-heart write. I just love all three last stanzas. Sublime in its sincerity, Emile.
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Date: 3/3/2018 6:27:00 PM
Thanks Line, I truly appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/3/2018 3:03:00 PM
Well expressed poem and the reader can feel it. Nice one Emile :)
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Date: 3/3/2018 3:08:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, you are my morning smile my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/3/2018 11:49:00 AM
Sweet and practical...Love the message...All the best Emile
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Date: 3/3/2018 1:32:00 PM
Thanks Arturo, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

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