Get Your Premium Membership

Tell Me

Tell me that thy love be true, And I will never ever distrust again. My fairest, I do pledge never again to go insane With rage, but be reborn from sin and bid adieu To the pain that overtook and grew In my broken body where jealousy did reign, And controlled thy being through each and every vein To proportions that were too impossible to subdue. If thou do’st say thee does truly love me Then consider thy mind and body clean, Through the communion of thou dearest decree Of love in its purest form that’s rarely seldom seen. Take thy peasant hand and this guarantee, I will be thy King—if thou will be thy Queen?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/4/2010 5:45:00 AM
Mike, this is still a beauty, I just wanted you to know, that I am mailing your Certificate of Achievement today, sorry for the delay work, work, work.... Love Constance
Login to Reply
Date: 6/28/2010 5:38:00 AM
Congrats
Login to Reply
Date: 6/25/2010 12:14:00 PM
A MASTERPIECE!!!!! Congratulations on your well deserved first place win, Mike. Lainie
Login to Reply
Date: 6/25/2010 7:12:00 AM
Congratulations Mike on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Italian Sonnet". Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 6/24/2010 6:35:00 PM
What a fairytale and beautiful sonnet this is! Congratulations on your winning poem! ~ Carrie
Login to Reply
Date: 6/24/2010 5:57:00 PM
Congratualtions on your first place for this wonderful and flowing Italion Sonnet,,very well written,,,Blessings..Cecil
Login to Reply
Date: 6/24/2010 4:32:00 PM
Love, Love, it Love it! Great choice for 1st, congrats!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/24/2010 3:02:00 PM
Congratulations, Mike, on first place in my Italian Sonnet contest, with this beautiful poem. Could you, please send me your address on soupmail, so I can forward, your Certificate of Achievement..Love Constance
Login to Reply
Date: 6/23/2010 3:55:00 PM
Sounds very sonnet-ish, very romantic, Mike. Thanks for your sweet comments. LUv, Andrea
Login to Reply
Date: 6/21/2010 2:36:00 AM
excellent sonnet, Harry
Login to Reply
Date: 6/20/2010 10:04:00 AM
Of love in its purest form that's rarely seldom seen. Nice line, good job on a difficult form.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/19/2010 7:52:00 PM
soup mail..
Login to Reply
Date: 6/18/2010 7:31:00 PM
beautiful write, enjoyed..P.D.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/18/2010 6:27:00 PM
A wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Caryl
Login to Reply
Date: 6/18/2010 2:46:00 PM
This is just awesome. I like the reconciliatory tone of the poem. It calls for a win-win situation. Great job! Joseph
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs