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Tell Your wind no need to roar, my own need push enough -- Tell Your Sun high at its zenith, no need for excess gleamith -- Confound further my soul saying, for you, no love to be found, in painted sky on textured ground -- If love, for me, not near nor far-apart – Why, Dear Lord!~ gave You this poet a beating heart?

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Date: 5/1/2025 9:18:00 AM
Your "Tell" is a powerful write. Great Ending... Have a blessed day writing away..................
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Joe Dimino
Date: 5/2/2025 4:42:00 AM
Thank you, Paula; you made me day! Have a blessed writing day!
Date: 4/30/2025 8:25:00 PM
This pro found depth in your poem, Joe.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 5/1/2025 2:11:00 AM
You are a Pro indeed -- thank you, Gershon; have a wonderful writing day!
Date: 4/30/2025 2:22:00 PM
Some powerful contrasts in this. Love the ending
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Joe Dimino
Date: 4/30/2025 2:35:00 PM
Hi Andrea; thank you. Believe or not, fun to write.
Date: 4/30/2025 12:44:00 PM
Well I am going to beat up on your beating heart Lol))) with the reflection that He loved you enough to save your soul.' Then He sent you me A trial no doubt.! But a willing brother (that never Doubt!) Though satan comes with honyed Tounge.? The man of God will not be undone.. To stand on His Word will bring ridicule.' Yet i aim for OVER THE JORDAN WHERE I'M NO MANS FOOL!!! All love and blessings.' dear brother.)
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Joe Dimino
Date: 4/30/2025 2:41:00 PM
Hi Joe; just a poem. I grew up on the likes of, Annabel Lee, The Highwayman, etc., and every now and then I like to return to my Classical Roots. The old, romantic poetry, of romantic eras in poetry, remain dear to my heart. Blessings my friend.
Date: 4/30/2025 6:55:00 AM
- A deep, thoughtful poem, Joe :) - hugs
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Joe Dimino
Date: 4/30/2025 7:18:00 AM
Hi Anne; have a beautiful day! Thank you.

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