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Telary Idoneous Work

He wore orange-red dread locks Elegantly danced on horizon far away Yet he set the woods on fire Talar wore stirring up all kinds of desire Roosters arose with voice of power Sleepy pines in silhouette stood Yet dormant in cold and frozen twigs Telary now he stirs the air to warm and play Idoneous happiness he brought Sending the cold swiftly away

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/1/2011 3:20:00 PM

Telary Idoneous Work loosely interpertated:.. Spinning An Appropriate Work .. Definitions: Telary_spinning a web Idoneous_suitable or appropriate... I took the last letter of the first word in the previous line and started the next line..I used an internet site of unusual words to get some words.. Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/1/2011 2:15:00 PM

I'd say it's free verse and not bad BUT you need a note telling what *Telary is & * Idoneous. Soup mail me I'd really like to know? Light 7 Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/21/2011 7:44:00 AM

thankxx Sara for your uplifting words on my poetry ... and contest entries.. very much appreciated my friend.. wishing u a very happy weekend full of blessings and luv..

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/20/2011 10:27:00 PM

really enjoyed this flowing write sara.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/19/2011 7:34:00 PM

SAra, is this personification or an actual name of somebody? I googled it and could not find out what the title means. Anyway, you create a very pleasing scene of his "work!" Luv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/19/2011 4:41:00 AM

I am reading such amazing poetry this morning Sara. I am glad yours is among the ones I have had the pleasure to read today. I wish you a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

James Peranteau

Date: 1/19/2011 1:32:00 AM

Sara dear poet, I feel the artist sailing here in this write, almost as if you could not stop this write, *smiles* Very poetic Sara ! much love, james

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/18/2011 10:56:00 PM

Hi Sara, i sense some indiginenous religion here, interest to know which, love the poem, so well constructed, as usual, enjoyed. Harry

William Willis

Date: 1/18/2011 4:52:00 PM

Hi Sara,very intruiging poem.Well penned.