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Teenage Blues

My whinny,crabby, hungry teen Your stinky,spoiled and quite mean You want, you need, you have to have The latest,newest, modern fad Your greasy, grimy, hands smear My wall, light switches, and the mirror Empty snack bags,with sweet and sour Create tall,extensive buildings that tower Your messy,your dirty,in need of a shower Please make it quick,not loiter an hour Your smelly,nasty, disgusting shoes Are slowly poisoning every room Even with big mouth,rolling eyes and sighs I would not trade you, I surmise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/15/2013 11:34:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS IN THE Synathroesmic Cat Contest. Have yourself a nice day ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/14/2013 5:48:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 5/14/2013 9:21:00 AM
That last line says it all !! Loved it!! Congratulations!
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Date: 5/14/2013 9:20:00 AM
Adorabley done. Congratulations on your win.Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/14/2013 8:25:00 AM
you described every teen here I think, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 5/13/2013 8:58:00 PM
Jennifer, Congratulations, in "The Synathroesmic Cat Contest." take care*LINDA
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Date: 5/13/2013 7:23:00 PM
Hi Jennifer, My son will be a teen next year are things going to be so bad??? congratulations on your win!!!
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Date: 5/13/2013 7:15:00 PM
Congratulations. Thank you for your wonderful poem in my Synothroesmic Cat Contest. Best wishes, SuZ
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Date: 4/23/2013 6:03:00 PM
Great poem. I can relate to this.
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Date: 4/10/2013 2:45:00 PM
a cute modern sonnet take on your son. Yep, they can be so sloppy, but you gotta love 'um anyway!!
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Date: 4/9/2013 10:55:00 PM
They're the same everywhere, Jen, if that helps. Wonder would they lift their game if one or two of us did trade them. You've depicted them just the way they are. Nice poem. - Red
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Date: 4/7/2013 12:33:00 PM
Hahahaha! Absolutely love this! Well done, hope you are having an awesome day! Hugs :)
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Date: 4/4/2013 6:04:00 AM
Haha...my oldest is 10. I'm not looking forward to the teenage years! Enjoyed this one!
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