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Teen Daydream

I swim slowly, almost languidly, But alert, careful not to let my hands Break the surface, make the faintest sound. Oppressive stillness into which a tropical bird Cries with an old man's voice. Only my eyes and nose above The smooth warm liquid. My long black hair rising and falling across The small eddies of my movement. A white gardenia behind one ear. Darn! I can never remember which ear! The Japanese are everywhere!

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Date: 8/27/2022 9:33:00 PM
I'm telling you: That last line nearly sank me! Great write, Elizabeth! Silence is Golden, Gershon
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Date: 8/26/2022 4:23:00 PM
Ah, Rico! How great to start my day with a laugh! Kind friend. Elizabeth
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Date: 8/26/2022 11:12:00 AM
Naught to worry as it is the look in your eyes that conveys the message! Aloha!
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