Teen Daydream

I swim slowly, almost languidly, 
But alert, careful not to let my hands
Break the surface, make the faintest sound.
Oppressive stillness into which a tropical bird
Cries with an old man's voice.
Only my eyes and nose above
The smooth warm liquid.
My long black hair rising and falling across
The small eddies of my movement. 
A white gardenia behind one ear.
Darn! I can never remember which ear!
The Japanese are everywhere!
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Wolf Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 9:33 PM
I'm telling you: That last line nearly sank me! Great write, Elizabeth! Silence is Golden, Gershon
Mccann Avatar
August 26, 2022 at 4:23 PM
Ah, Rico! How great to start my day with a laugh! Kind friend. Elizabeth
Leffanta Avatar
August 26, 2022 at 11:12 AM
Naught to worry as it is the look in your eyes that conveys the message! Aloha!
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