Nette Onclaud Poet Couplet

Techno Junk

Keyboards smash for a night owl like me
Refreshing the page; you won’t agree
To open the sites as eyes can’t track
web-links; now comes my panic attack.
Deadline begs the hard drive, “ oh, please load”
Yet, horrid creatures romp in your abode;
The mouse, bugs, and plants versus zombies!
Hey, Dell; stop ruling technology.
With one naughty virus, you are junk
A darn gadget Windows can debunk.
Now,who leads this port, man or machine
My files are saved,well dear PC, I win!



Carol Eastman's Computer Contest
-Plants versus Zombies is an online game
4/9/2015

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Arthur Vaso May 16, 2015 at 9:11 PM LOL loved this!

Thomas Martin May 8, 2015 at 7:21 PM So very funny, nette! Have been there, done that, I say! Really enjoyed your tale!

Lindsay Laurie May 1, 2015 at 6:52 PM Hello nette... Sometimes I wonder how we survived without these gadgets that bring the world into our homes. Enjoyed your tale nette - Lindsay

Monterey Sirak April 25, 2015 at 2:08 PM I love this one! It sounds like me. My computer can drive me to the edge!

Poet Destroyer A April 18, 2015 at 6:52 PM wonderful win. LINDA

John Lawless April 18, 2015 at 11:49 AM Alas, Nette, you cannot just "give it two aspirin and wake it in the morning". 'Grats on the win.

Shadow Hamilton April 17, 2015 at 5:48 PM great one so funny Nette congrats on win hugs 7

Richard Lamoureux April 17, 2015 at 9:05 AM Still like it, congrats!

Andrea Dietrich April 16, 2015 at 10:15 PM Awesome ending on THIS one. Congrats, Nette. Cute poem

Sandra Haight April 16, 2015 at 3:43 PM You certainly imaged that frustration we all encounter at one time or another! Love you poem. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison April 16, 2015 at 2:15 PM Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) Hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet April 11, 2015 at 2:16 PM The perfect embrace of technology, fantasy, imagination and the warmth of the human touch. Emile.

M. L. Kiser April 10, 2015 at 4:42 PM Oh, I love it! Best of luck in the contest.

Richard Lamoureux April 10, 2015 at 9:52 AM Ha ha, I like it!

Andrea Dietrich April 9, 2015 at 10:29 PM at least for the time being you have won, but don't rest on your laurels, my dear!! WEll done for the contest!

Franco Gonza April 9, 2015 at 12:51 PM Highly creative. I like it when mod technology and its frailties mesh, and you have done that very well here. A fun rant and a superior poem, Nette.

James Fraser April 9, 2015 at 12:38 PM What would we do without them nowadays, koolio write for the contest Princess, hugs, James :) :)

Constance La France April 9, 2015 at 6:18 AM nette, I really like your computer contest poem, sometimes I am a night owl too so I understand, well done 7, and best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poetry

Eileen Manassian April 9, 2015 at 3:39 AM Lovely write, Nette. You really got us going with this rant. Yes, computers can drive us nuts, but without them....we couldn't survive. How would we read your poetry? ;) hugs

Jan Allison April 9, 2015 at 1:55 AM Love your take on the theme - great humour :-) hugs Jan. Good luck in the contest

Kelly Deschler April 9, 2015 at 12:54 AM It seems like when I need to be online the most is when I encounter problems. It can get frustrating for sure!... This poem has a nice rhyme and flow to it. Nice work, Nette! Good luck in Carol's contest!