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Tears On the Wind

Wheel of fears and cheers etched tears in my years swirling me to rumination that queers. Lessons, I learned streak golden souvenirs enlightening me in every frontiers. Imprudent dusts blurred and hardened my heart, tears on the wind rescued fiercely aghast allowing me to behold rainbow skirt... Firing my bravery ever not hush! Onions in my eyes upraise bitterness, drained my strength awhile, but without delay same tears uphold me to deliverance encompassing to each dawn - twilight lay. Tears on the wind, my soulful song prayer. Amazing grace revealed through all dried tears. Tears - a heaven rain for my whole new birth bathing my heart and soul wholly with mirth. © O. E. Guillermo 11:23 am May 22, 2014 Sponsor Vicky Tsiluma Contest Name I'll be back! Placed First.. to God be the greatest glory.

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/15/2014 10:03:00 AM

You have a way with words, congrats.

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/14/2014 7:08:00 PM

Wonderful write Olive, Grats on your win :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/14/2014 5:32:00 AM

Congrats on huge win my dear Olive on this fabulous write! loved the last stanza the most.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/13/2014 9:57:00 AM

Brilliant and creative write. Congrats on the win, Olive

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/28/2014 12:30:00 AM

astounding and outstanding!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/29/2014 2:32:00 PM

Thanks much..:) with your comments.:) gbu

Joseph May

Date: 5/26/2014 6:54:00 PM

Well penned Olive...I liked the first line and the amzing grace line...Thanks for stopping by

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/29/2014 2:30:00 PM

Hanks Joseph..:) I'm glad you like it..:) GBU

Paul Callus

Date: 5/25/2014 5:15:00 PM

You keep challenging yourself Olive_eloi! You try and try and learn! This is a good and expressive write. gl in contest:) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/25/2014 5:26:00 PM

of course Paul.. :) the best competition is not with anyone but just in yourself.. :) thanks for this mark.. :) GBU sweets

Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/23/2014 2:06:00 AM

A very creative and expressive write, Olive Eloisa. Very beautiful and soulful! I think Gail is going to like this one! Good luck in the contest!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/23/2014 12:40:00 PM

Thanks much Kelly..:) your comments are well appreciated and so kind..:) thank you Kelly..:)

Eric Schojan

Date: 5/22/2014 7:34:00 PM

This is purely awesomeness, this makes me want to learn more about the different types of poetry so I can try and write something even close to this, love the metaphor draped all through this write, thank you for sharing!! :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/23/2014 12:30:00 AM

thanks much Eric.. :) I really appreciate that :) i too didn't know all these until I was here.. :) so i just read and read and read and tried.. :) anyhow there is nothing to lose.. :D