Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Iambic Pentameter

Tears On the Wind

Wheel of fears and cheers etched tears in my years
swirling me to rumination that queers.
Lessons, I learned streak golden souvenirs
enlightening me in every frontiers.

Imprudent dusts blurred and hardened my heart,
tears on the wind rescued fiercely aghast
allowing me to behold rainbow skirt...
Firing my bravery ever not hush!

Onions in my eyes upraise bitterness,
drained my strength awhile, but without delay
same tears uphold me to deliverance
encompassing to each dawn - twilight lay.

Tears on the wind, my soulful song prayer.
Amazing grace revealed through all dried tears.
Tears - a heaven rain for my whole new birth
bathing my heart and soul wholly with mirth.


© O. E. Guillermo
11:23 am
May 22, 2014

Sponsor	Vicky Tsiluma
Contest Name	I'll be back! 
Placed First.. to God be the greatest glory.

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Richard Lamoureux August 15, 2014 at 10:03 AM You have a way with words, congrats.

Casarah Nance August 14, 2014 at 7:08 PM Wonderful write Olive, Grats on your win :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 14, 2014 at 5:32 AM Congrats on huge win my dear Olive on this fabulous write! loved the last stanza the most.

Dr.Ram Mehta August 13, 2014 at 9:57 AM Brilliant and creative write. Congrats on the win, Olive

Arthur Vaso May 28, 2014 at 12:30 AM astounding and outstanding! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 29, 2014 at 2:32 PM Thanks much..:) with your comments.:) gbu

Joseph May May 26, 2014 at 6:54 PM Well penned Olive...I liked the first line and the amzing grace line...Thanks for stopping by Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 29, 2014 at 2:30 PM Hanks Joseph..:) I'm glad you like it..:) GBU

Paul Callus May 25, 2014 at 5:15 PM You keep challenging yourself Olive_eloi! You try and try and learn! This is a good and expressive write. gl in contest:) // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 25, 2014 at 5:26 PM of course Paul.. :) the best competition is not with anyone but just in yourself.. :) thanks for this mark.. :) GBU sweets

Kelly Deschler May 23, 2014 at 2:06 AM A very creative and expressive write, Olive Eloisa. Very beautiful and soulful! I think Gail is going to like this one! Good luck in the contest! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 23, 2014 at 12:40 PM Thanks much Kelly..:) your comments are well appreciated and so kind..:) thank you Kelly..:)

Eric Schojan May 22, 2014 at 7:34 PM This is purely awesomeness, this makes me want to learn more about the different types of poetry so I can try and write something even close to this, love the metaphor draped all through this write, thank you for sharing!! :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 23, 2014 at 12:30 AM thanks much Eric.. :) I really appreciate that :) i too didn't know all these until I was here.. :) so i just read and read and read and tried.. :) anyhow there is nothing to lose.. :D