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Tears On the Wind

Tears on the wind Crying in rain Memories hurt Sadness again Smiling in sun Laughter reborn Healing from hurt No time to mourn Old love expired New love required For Gail’s Tears on the Wind contest

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Faye Gibson

Date: 6/3/2014 11:11:00 AM

Very good, Jack. The last two lines say it all. Thanks for your visit to my work.

Robert Johnson

Date: 5/31/2014 10:56:00 AM

Crying in rain is too much pain. But soon will wash away the stain. And pure as driven snow we'll know. That love will come, just watch it grow.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2014 10:36:00 PM

I LOVE those last two lines. Awesome.

Audrey Haick

Date: 5/29/2014 5:06:00 PM

This is one for the Winner's List, Jack!!... Love the directness and the brevity is perfect. I predict a win and also that those tears will be dried one of these days and I will remind you with, "I told you so"! : ) xxx Annaliise

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/29/2014 4:32:00 PM

Dear Jack, Rain often makes me feel melancholy too. After a long period of rain, the sun does bring great joy. Love the last two lines!! Wow. Best wishes in Gail's contest. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/29/2014 2:54:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest...Thanks for the visit to my page..The one of the Magnolias about which I write about is a tree..I think it is called Magnolia Grandifloria..Sara

Jadazzle United

Date: 5/29/2014 2:16:00 PM

Stunning poem jack so simple yet it speaks volumes - love the last couplet ! hugs jan xxx