Jack Horne Poet Rhyme

Tears On the Wind

Tears on the wind
Crying in rain
Memories hurt
Sadness again

Smiling in sun
Laughter reborn
Healing from hurt
No time to mourn

Old love expired
New love required

For Gail’s Tears on the Wind contest

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Faye Gibson June 3, 2014 at 11:11 AM Very good, Jack. The last two lines say it all. Thanks for your visit to my work.

Robert Johnson May 31, 2014 at 10:56 AM Crying in rain is too much pain. But soon will wash away the stain. And pure as driven snow we'll know. That love will come, just watch it grow.

Andrea Dietrich May 29, 2014 at 10:36 PM I LOVE those last two lines. Awesome.

Audrey Haick May 29, 2014 at 5:06 PM This is one for the Winner's List, Jack!!... Love the directness and the brevity is perfect. I predict a win and also that those tears will be dried one of these days and I will remind you with, "I told you so"! : ) xxx Annaliise

Carolyn Devonshire May 29, 2014 at 4:32 PM Dear Jack, Rain often makes me feel melancholy too. After a long period of rain, the sun does bring great joy. Love the last two lines!! Wow. Best wishes in Gail's contest. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick May 29, 2014 at 2:54 PM Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest...Thanks for the visit to my page..The one of the Magnolias about which I write about is a tree..I think it is called Magnolia Grandifloria..Sara

Jadazzle United May 29, 2014 at 2:16 PM Stunning poem jack so simple yet it speaks volumes - love the last couplet ! hugs jan xxx