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Tears of the Sky

The earth gets drenched by the tears of the sky She welcomes the kiss of every raindrop Wondering why, why do the heavens cry The earth gets drenched by the tears of the sky Can't comfort him, however she may try She knows he will stop when he has to stop The earth gets drenched by the tears of the sky She welcomes the kiss of every raindrop 05.21.2021

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Date: 5/21/2021 11:19:00 PM
This contest will be difficult to judge. Best for a win.
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Date: 5/21/2021 3:41:00 PM
Lovely triolet. I hope it placed!
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Date: 5/21/2021 3:41:00 PM
or that it WILL place. I can't keep up with his contests!!
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Date: 5/21/2021 8:35:00 AM
Love the way you personified the sky, Jo. Rain is usually a blessing. A very nice triolet. Best wishes in Brian's contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 5/21/2021 8:06:00 AM
Gorgeous piece. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 5/21/2021 7:12:00 AM
A beautiful well written triolet Jo, love how you discribe the rain as tears. Good luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Date: 5/21/2021 6:47:00 AM
Beautiful and breathtaking. Love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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