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Tears of Heaven

Sometimes, it falls like heaven is crying for the minds that raid desecrated the land. The injurious hands left the earth dying like a helpless fish left on a dry sand. Thy wrath that drowns the hearts that prey brings a wave of worries and agony for the trees on the mountains faraway we're killed for just a pay. October 29, 2022 Dizain Poetry Contest (4th place) Sponsored by: Sotto Poet Edited: November 10, 2022

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Date: 11/7/2022 12:42:00 PM
Sad that trees are harvested in such uncaring ways. We just don't realize how much paper products we use these days though. Congratulations on your work being on the winners' list. Way to go. Sara
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 11/7/2022 1:49:00 PM
Thank you very much... I could not find a better way to express the ending... But I'm learning...
Date: 11/6/2022 5:25:00 AM
"like heaven is crying", "Injurious hands", "helpless fish left on a dry sand " - So poetic. Congratulations!
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 11/6/2022 8:58:00 AM
Thank you very much... congratulations too...

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