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* For my beloved children ... more enduring than the stars, my love for you. *

oh, my precious child! let me kiss away your weep - do not be troubled, the moon but bids good night (stars whispering their ancient lullaby) swallowing not, the western reach but merely giving pause to the day, waking so that the grateful star of morn should adorn its burgeoning bosom let not the salty seep of your cheek yet trill such certain and elegant inequity there be should a stain darken that pinafore, pressed a scandal be my name with thy mother should those eyes dampen your Sunday best and surely not for the sake of Apollo's languor - oh, such dire dalliance, that! I adore thee, my wee lass Boundless are the ways - Echoed in your mother's smile There, so deep your gaze 'tis true, his aged face did blush, fleeting dipping his dusty chin to the sea but it was for Sol's regard only (their goodnight kiss - pressed tender, a-cheek) and no misfortune was spun we shall return, my child, sooner than soon and you will bear witness their recurrence your old man moon will beg company again with his patient aspect beaming shimmering bright for your veneration - soft, soft, so daubs the moon soft as bluebells blooming - wan on skin to softly swoon e'er a dream's consuming yes, I vow this to you, my daughter - you shall dance again on this shore bound and prance, my tiny ballerina you will twirl in the breath of evening, I am sure lit by the gangling glow, star-ward and tonight's lament will seem a silly song you shall see and be heartened, my little one and should I yet kiss that weep away, too? ah, but joyous, those tears... and as the heavens themselves (and the best born of a father's heart) how immeasurable their number … oh, my darling, precious child! ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Your Choice (4), Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "2019 Poetry Marathon Mile 18" Poetry Contest, Mark Toney, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 6/10/2019 6:37:00 AM
Congrats on your beautiful write, Greg! Great line and thought and all so true: and tonight's lament will seem a silly song
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/13/2019 6:03:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Kim, I greatly appreciate the kind comments ... blessings, my friend! :o) <3
Date: 6/9/2019 11:42:00 AM
So easy to see that this touching poem comes from the depth of your soul! Excellent, just freakin' excellent, Greg:-) Heartiest congrats on a well-deserved first placing!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/13/2019 6:02:00 AM
Many kind thanks to you, Edward, I'm very pleased you found this one worthwhile, as it means a great deal to me. Blessings, my friend! :o)
Date: 2/18/2019 2:26:00 PM
This is so filled with love, Gregory. That love is shining through the poem. Congrats on your win.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/26/2019 5:38:00 PM
Many kind thanks, Andrea, I'm honored that you found this worthy ... blessings to you, Buddy! :-) <3
Date: 2/17/2019 1:26:00 PM
Congratulations on yet another sterling and stirring win,Greg. It is a such a heartwarming tribute to the precious gift of parenthood.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/26/2019 5:37:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Wendy, I'm so pleased that you enjoyed my poem, Dear Poet! Blessings! :-) <3
Date: 2/16/2019 11:12:00 PM
Congrats on your silver medal win, Gregory. Beautifully penned.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/26/2019 5:36:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Line! :-) <3
Date: 2/16/2019 4:09:00 PM
First time I am reading this, Greg, and I had to read it again, as it mirrors my own feelings about my three children in a way that I could never express as you do. Beautiful! Congratulations on your podium placement! Fave! Sandra <3
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/26/2019 5:36:00 PM
Many kind and heartfelt thank you's, Sandra, I had a feeling you would relate to this one, and I'm so pleased you liked it! Blessings to you, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 2/16/2019 12:50:00 PM
I'm always in awe of your repertoire my friend. It is so much fun to watch, read and listen to all you share! Do not try this at home my friends - way too many delicious muses to trip on - seriously Greg, if minds could be sold Disney would be at your door this second--LOVE IT
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/26/2019 5:35:00 PM
Oh, you are far too kind, Craig, and I so appreciate these comments, because I know you mean them wholeheartedly. I am humbled that you find this one worthy of praise, and thankful for the words! Blessings, my friend! :-)
Date: 2/16/2019 12:43:00 PM
Greg, this is very heartfelt and special, bringing back many memories. A Fav for sure! Congratulations on your second-place win on Mile 18 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest! Thank you so much for supporting my contests. By continuing to place in the contests you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/26/2019 5:33:00 PM
Thank you so very kindly, Mark, this is very special to me ... I wanted to express the deep abiding love that a parent has for their own, and yet say it profoundly WITHOUT actually saying the words "I love you" ... I think we show our love more deeply that we say it, and those things stay with our children through the rough times. I hope I did that ... in some small way, at least. I am honored! :-)
Date: 4/12/2018 4:29:00 PM
Delightful, delicious, tender-render of father-daughter love. Brings back fond memories of 'daddy's little girl,' (who is approaching her---gulp---40th birthday in New Jersey). Whither the time?! Enjoy your darling(s), Brother Gregory R! :) Gershon
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/26/2018 4:55:00 PM
Thank you, my friend! My "baby" will turn 30 this year, (my son 32, my eldest daughter will turn 37 - yikes!), and I am now a GREAT-grandfather ... at sixty!! (Not kidding) I do NOT feel "this" old, my friend, lol! ;-)
Date: 4/8/2018 8:43:00 AM
Another masterpiece, a brilliant painting of a father's love.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/11/2018 12:39:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Becca - this one is very special to me, and I'm so pleased you enjoyed it! I'm not sure why this isn't getting any comments ... perhaps the traditional style? I'm a bit stumped, as I felt it rather good myself ... oh, well - can't win them all! ;-) <3

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