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Tears For a Rose

I strolled along a garden path as skies threatened with thunderous wrath. I knew I should find shelter soon. These storms could be severe in June. Then lightning split an angry sky and the gusty winds let out a cry. My feet froze near a rose in bloom. The roaring sky foretold of doom. Distraught, I cowered from circling clouds and feeling their rage, I wept out loud, wanting my sorrow to have a name, knowing the sky was feeling the same. Winds carry me, I dared to ask, housing this pain is a grueling task. Love rain on me, please drench my heart, cleanse my soul with a promising start. I screamed to heaven, take me away, where grays met with black, I begged to stay. Battered and bruised, hail pounded my skin. Struggling for courage somewhere deep within, I reached for the rose, wilted and torn, the softest petal, the sharpest thorn. I cried for the rose and I cried for me, for the beauty that was and never would be. for the Rhyming Game contest (Joyce Johnson)

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Date: 5/3/2015 10:31:00 PM
Rhonda, Congratulations on your win. Thanks for the support. SKAT
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Date: 6/18/2012 11:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Metaphoric Time" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/17/2012 4:26:00 PM
RHONDA,;-) congratulations with your wonderful win in my contest~ take care and have yourself a wonderful Fathers Day,~ xox~PD
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Date: 5/21/2012 4:12:00 PM
Ha;-) Rhonda! another wonderful one I see, I'm liking the rhyming game Joyce cooked up herself! Congratulations with your awesome poem, take care :-) * PD
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Date: 5/19/2012 8:40:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Rhonda. Outstanding. Great job. Nice going, my friend. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 5/19/2012 6:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Joyce's "Rhyming Game" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/19/2012 3:08:00 AM
Wonderful imagery... and congrats... Terry
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Date: 5/19/2012 2:05:00 AM
Rhonda congrats on your win..David
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Date: 5/18/2012 12:26:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem, Rhonda. Very heartfelt words. True beauty never leaves. Such beauty remains inside and unfolds once again when the sunshine and time are right. God sees all! Hugs & God bless, Maureen
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Date: 5/17/2012 8:40:00 PM
I love this Rhonda. I love the literal and figurative interpretion this poem can take. Nice smooth flow and great rhyme. Easily read, easily understood and easily empathized with. A very, good write. Thanks for sharing. Joe
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Date: 5/17/2012 6:18:00 AM
Rhonda exceptioal, Love it..good luck..David
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Date: 5/17/2012 5:34:00 AM
Wow, this is sooo beautifully written..I love it..I love..I love it!!! Good luck in the contest..this sounds like a winner.
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Date: 5/17/2012 5:04:00 AM
Touching ....but lovely written poem Rhonda. - Wish you luck in Joyces contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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