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Tears

I'm in a room, screaming as loud as I can. But nobody can hear me, nobody understands. I was lost and then I was found. You came and changed my world around. But lately all you do is yell, I feel like Im talking to a wall. There is “empty” in your eyes, your not there to catch me when I fall. I can’t trust anyone, they all cheat, steal and lie. Sadly, I learned the hard way, and now all I do is cry. I’m never alone there’s always a shadow in the room. Walking slow behind me, and around all corners it will loom. I realize its just me, and my shadow now. My personality has changed and I cant understand how. I want to be me again, and I want you to see. That if we make a simple change, how much happier I will be. So please be patient, and understand all that has been told. I cant make it through alone, this journey is getting old. All I need is you, just a hand to hold to get me there. Then its me and you forever, no more dispair.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/26/2010 1:55:00 PM
HEY THERE GIRL, THIS POEM IS GOOD. YES YOU SHOULD POST MORE. I SEE YOU DID USE YOUR LAST NAME AFTER ALL. I AM SO GLAD TO HAVE INSPIRED YOU TO WRITE!! THAT'S WHAT IT IS ALL ABOUT TO PASS THE WORD ON IF YOU WRITE OR JOURNAL AND NEED TO EXPRESS FEELINGS THEN PUT IT IN A POEM AND POST IT. YOU HELP OTHERS AS WELL WITH YOUR WRITING! MORE THAN YOU KNOW SOMETIMES. THIS POEM IS VERY HEART FELT FOR ME. WELL DONE. ''KEEP WRITING'' THAT IS AN ORDER! LOVE RHONDA
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Date: 10/14/2010 12:48:00 PM
aww a great peoem and welcome, if this is based on real life you better off alone that someone shouting and screaming at you, i been through that and no bloke is worth the pain thats why I am alone once more just as you describe but I have God and that's all I need and my kids. God is always there so we never really alone at all, God bless from diane
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Date: 10/14/2010 6:37:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Tabitha. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/13/2010 8:17:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your creative poetry tonight.. hope u will check out the contest page offered to new members.. and good luck with luv.. impressive piece..luv..
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