Tears

Congratulations on your well deserved win in John's contest Brandee. Love, Carol

Congratulations Brandee on your placement in the Gauntlet Contest with this great Etheree. Good writing! Lovingly, Dane Ann

Congrats Brandee on your winning poem in John's contest with this wonderful write... enjoy the success of victory .. with luv.. Linda-Marie..

this is a very sad poem but i can't say that waking in the morning isn't a chore for me sometimes it is hard when your days are a travesty, and when you are heart broken your days are definitly a travesty! great piece! =)Jo

Heartfelt Etheree, a joy to read Brandee>>James

congrats. this is very moving. terrible to feel that way!

Congrats on your success in Matt's contest Brandee.Rgds Brian

Good job on this form. Congratulations on win. Joyce

Congratulations Brandee on this winning poem! Well done! ~ Carrie

Contratulations, for your honorable mention in the New Terrains Contest. It is a well deserved recognition. Hurray for you!!! Lovingly, Dane Smith-Johnsen

Brandee congrats on placing in the contest, mj

Congratulations on your wonderful win! ~Trudy~

deep so deep-well penned--charma

Brandee, Life can be sad sometimes... and tearful. I like your choice of poetic form for this because it's like tears falling down life's tilted plane (diagonal) of emotions. Thanks for your comments, too. Lovingly, Dane (You have soupmail)

A very moving write--I find writing to be such a wonderful way to express one's feelings and you've done a lovely job on this one--thank you as well for you wonderful comments on my poem...enjoy your day! --nikko :)

It's good that we can recognize what hurts us so that we can avoid them..... nice write ! thanks for kind comments, abe

Nicely written. I know there must be a name for this style of an added syllable to each line. Thank you for yoru comgratulations. Love, Joyce

sometimes the most important thing we need to do...IS cry....I don't mean that to sound as a cliche...but it's true..thank you for your kind words Brandee...My mother loved this poem as well...God wrote it He gets all the credit...I'm glad you enjoyed it...My Dad's been telling me for years to write a book...for the first time I'm really considering it...thanks again...Kris

Nice write. Written full of pain. This is not a good feeling, I know too. Great job

amazing piece!

find your joy. light & Love

This is a wonderfully done poem, I like the form also..and thank you for your comments on my featured poem also. ~Trudy~

heartbreak is a pain im all too familiar with , this hit a nerve , good write :)

The emotion comes through your words in this poem. Interesting use of this challenging form. Keep on writing! Karen

aah.. its so sad and beautiful at the same time.. I also have a poem called Tears... and thank you so much for the comment on my poem Kiss Kiss... Constance