Tears

TEARS Eye beads Salted drops In grief or anger Sobs from the deepest heart Pearls, when shed for others' lives "Full and swelling tide of feeling" 09.08.2020 For Joseph May's "Pyramids" contest

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/22/2020 11:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Tears" is beautiful. Enjoy your beautiful win.......

Carol Mitra

Date: 9/20/2020 11:19:00 PM

Beautiful and full of heart...Congrats on your win Jo...Take care.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2020 1:41:00 PM

This shows a great depth of feeling and creative ability to write on it. Congrats.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/20/2020 12:27:00 PM

- Sparkling pearls :) - Congratulations on your win, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 9/20/2020 11:46:00 AM

Very nicely done Jo, Congrats on your win

Anisha Dutta

Date: 9/16/2020 7:17:00 AM

EXCELLENT. I am charmed.All the best.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/8/2020 2:13:00 AM

such a touching piece Jo - after going to a funeral yesterday I especially love pearls when shed for others' lives:-) hugs Jan xx