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Teardrop

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Teardrop


A vision plummets
atop a face carved of stone.
Living waters confession ...
pools festered regrets.


2022 May 08
*1st Place*
Naani
~~Joseph May: Judged 2022 May 23

*HMS: 5,7,7,5 = 24

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Eve Roper Date: 5/27/2022 7:48:00 AM Congratulations, William , on your win in the Naani Form in Joseph May contest. Great verse. Blessings my friend Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 5/27/2022 8:59:00 AM I thank you, Eve, for your time and shared thoughts my friend, Aloha~William

Christuraj Alex Date: 5/25/2022 9:15:00 AM "Living waters confession" - What an expression! Congratulations! Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 5/25/2022 11:49:00 AM Spot on, Christuraj, I am truly grateful, my friend, Aloha~William

Sam Kauffman Date: 5/24/2022 11:34:00 AM Aloha William. Your teardrop overflows with metaphoric depth and vibrant images. As always, there are many layers to delve into in your poem. Mahalo dear friend for this gem. Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 5/24/2022 2:56:00 PM Your unfailing words of good cheer, Sam, fill the void that tempts my friend, and my compliments on your first place win 'o aliferous one, Aloha~William

Jo Chamberlain Date: 5/24/2022 5:34:00 AM Such a lovely Naani. Congratulations on your winning placement. Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 5/24/2022 9:18:00 AM I am appreciative, Joanna, thank you and my compliments for your harmonious win as well, my friend, Aloha~William

Valsa George Date: 5/23/2022 10:00:00 PM Wonderful writing, Williams ! Congratulations on your well deserved win . Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 5/23/2022 10:23:00 PM Thank you, Valsa, and my compliments on your crafted winning on bliss my friend, Aloha~William

Paulette Calasibetta Date: 5/23/2022 3:55:00 PM Congratulations on your win in the contest. Wonderful imagery. :)Paulette Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 5/23/2022 5:52:00 PM I'm truly grateful, Paulette, and my compliments on your winning entry almost mirror mine my friend, Aloha~William

Sotto Poet Date: 5/23/2022 1:08:00 PM Very nicely penned William, Congrats on your win Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 5/23/2022 1:16:00 PM Thank you, Lasaad, and my compliments on your beautiful winning statement my friend, Aloha~William

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/23/2022 12:58:00 PM Very well penned. Congrats, my friend. Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 5/23/2022 1:11:00 PM Thanks again, Andrea, and my compliments on winning about your plain truth my friend, Aloha~William

Joseph May Date: 5/23/2022 12:26:00 PM Very nicely penned Hilo, Congrats on your win Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 5/23/2022 12:55:00 PM Thanks, Joseph, I had fun my friend, Aloha~William

Paula Goldsmith Date: 5/23/2022 12:24:00 PM Congratulations on your win. A powerful write. Have a great/blessed day.................... Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 5/23/2022 12:56:00 PM I am blessed, Paula, by your words my friend, Aloha~William

L Milton Hankins Date: 5/8/2022 3:38:00 PM This is truly an amazing verse, Hilo Poet. I was thoroughly moved by it. Nice writing! Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 5/8/2022 4:24:00 PM Admittedly, 'tis a stirring piece, Milt, as you've described, whereto, it went unnoticed until its completion my friend, Aloha~William