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Tear

Tiny droplets of moisture edge their way out across my cheek, soft trickles rush past my lips

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Robin Davis
Date: 9/28/2013 10:04:00 PM
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This is a short but deep and powerful story of the teardrop. nicely done
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John Posey
Date: 9/6/2013 10:45:00 AM
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The short journey of a teardrop makes a great acrostic. You might like the teardrop mentioned in my "Reflection" found in my portfolio.... Jake
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 9/5/2013 3:53:00 PM
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very deep Sandra... congrats..Linda
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/5/2013 1:37:00 PM
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Congrats on your great winning work..Sara
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/2/2013 2:44:00 PM
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a lovely acrostic congrats on win Shadow x smiles
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Skat A
Date: 9/1/2013 1:58:00 PM
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Sandra, , congratulations on your acrostic win. ~ SKAT
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Donna Jones
Date: 9/1/2013 8:04:00 AM
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Ahh..so sad...great description....congratulations...
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Joseph May
Date: 8/31/2013 7:32:00 PM
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congrats on a fine win Sandra
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 8/31/2013 7:14:00 PM
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Terrific write and win! Hugs
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/31/2013 5:40:00 PM
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So beautifully descriptive in its simplicity. I just loved this one. Congrats in my contest.
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Asokumar Panangad
Date: 8/24/2013 7:28:00 AM
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Few words; but deeply expressive Acrostic, Oh! Sandra.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/24/2013 7:18:00 AM
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This is sad and beautiful in it's simplicity. I hape all your tears are converted to tears of joy.
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 8/23/2013 10:12:00 PM
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Hello Sandra, this is a really great acrostic. SAD.... you described the running tears perfectly. I loved all four lines in the word tear. The imagery is what it is. 7..... always~ Linda
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/24/2013 6:23:00 AM
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thank you so much for stopping by to read my poem and for your wonderful reply! hugs
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... Gigno
Date: 8/23/2013 9:58:00 PM
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Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/23/2013 9:23:00 PM
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A very creative and sweet expression. It's a wow :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/24/2013 6:24:00 AM
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Thanks so much Karen, I appreciate all your kind replies...I hope you have a great weekend! Hugs

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