Tear

Tiny droplets of moisture edge their way out across my cheek, soft trickles rush past my lips

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Robin Davis

Date: 9/28/2013 10:04:00 PM

This is a short but deep and powerful story of the teardrop. nicely done

John Posey

Date: 9/6/2013 10:45:00 AM

The short journey of a teardrop makes a great acrostic. You might like the teardrop mentioned in my "Reflection" found in my portfolio.... Jake

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/5/2013 3:53:00 PM

very deep Sandra... congrats..Linda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/5/2013 1:37:00 PM

Congrats on your great winning work..Sara

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 9/2/2013 2:44:00 PM

a lovely acrostic congrats on win Shadow x smiles

Skat A

Date: 9/1/2013 1:58:00 PM

Sandra, , congratulations on your acrostic win. ~ SKAT

Donna Jones

Date: 9/1/2013 8:04:00 AM

Ahh..so sad...great description....congratulations...

Joseph May

Date: 8/31/2013 7:32:00 PM

congrats on a fine win Sandra

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 8/31/2013 7:14:00 PM

Terrific write and win! Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2013 5:40:00 PM

So beautifully descriptive in its simplicity. I just loved this one. Congrats in my contest.

Asokumar Panangad

Date: 8/24/2013 7:28:00 AM

Few words; but deeply expressive Acrostic, Oh! Sandra.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/24/2013 7:18:00 AM

This is sad and beautiful in it's simplicity. I hape all your tears are converted to tears of joy.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/23/2013 10:12:00 PM

Hello Sandra, this is a really great acrostic. SAD.... you described the running tears perfectly. I loved all four lines in the word tear. The imagery is what it is. 7..... always~ Linda

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/24/2013 6:23:00 AM

thank you so much for stopping by to read my poem and for your wonderful reply! hugs

... Gigno

Date: 8/23/2013 9:58:00 PM

!!!

Karen Anglesey

Date: 8/23/2013 9:23:00 PM

A very creative and sweet expression. It's a wow :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/24/2013 6:24:00 AM

Thanks so much Karen, I appreciate all your kind replies...I hope you have a great weekend! Hugs