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Teach Your Bird To Sing Again

My new canary no more sings;
such grave chagrin her silence brings.
My friend said, "With my violin
I'll teach your bird to sing again".

He played a haunting melody;
tears formed as he sang harmony.
But my canary stood there, still -
her stifled voice a bitter pill.

He lay his instrument aside
and one more course of action tried.
He hoped my pet might soon attune
to him whistling a happy tune.

Still hushed, there was but one course left
for he could see she ached, bereft.
"It's not a song your songbird craves,
but liberty from what enslaves".

He tossed aside his music page
and to my shock, opened her cage.
Then as she winged to uncaged skies
we heard once more her song arise.


Written 26 Oct 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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George Avatar
December 25, 2022 at 10:46 PM
Hi John, this is a sweetly composed poem . Enjoyed it much. A caged lonely bird can never sing ! The ending of your poem says it aloud. Have a Merry Christmas with your family !
Radice Avatar
November 19, 2022 at 1:58 AM
A classic John Watt piece. Your rhyming sings loud and clear here. Your work compliments the image perfectly..or should that be the other way around? The image compliments your work? :) Pure music! Cheers - Gary
Ray Choudhury Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 6:11 AM
Congratulations! What a beautiful, true ending? What is more precious than freedom? Warm wishes ~ Mala
Watt Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 9:55 PM
Thank you for the kind visit, my friend. I appreciate you and your thoughtful words. Warmly ~ John
Alex Avatar
October 29, 2022 at 9:36 PM
Great ending. To a caged bird what else is song than freeedom? Congratulations!
Watt Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 9:54 PM
Thank you, Christuraj. I'm so glad you enjoyed this little verse and I appreciate the congrats ~ John
Leiser Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 7:50 PM
This is beautiful, John! You set the scene so well (in interpreting the picture) and the message of freedom is perfect! I so enjoyed this little poem! :)
Watt Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 9:53 PM
I have such gratitude for your poetry friendship, dear Laura! Thank you for taking time, I'm glad you enjoyed this. Hugs ~ John
Hawkins Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 1:27 PM
Wow! I enjoyed reading your poem, John. Surprisingly, any caged bird sings. Take care. Shirley
Watt Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 9:52 PM
Thank you for the lovely comment, Shirley ~ John
Sands Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 6:48 AM
A song of freedom. Well written :)
Watt Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 9:02 AM
Thank you, Heidi. I hope all is well with you ~ John
Mccann Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 9:11 PM
So nicely crafted! It has added to my pleasure from this painting; I feel the canary fly away. Elizabeth
Watt Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 9:02 AM
Thank you for your kind comment, Elizabeth. I was drawn to this painting and let the story build from there. Enjoy your day ~ John
Forbes Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 6:23 PM
This gave me the chills!!
Watt Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 8:05 PM
I hope you have a warm sweater, teehee... thank you very much, Becky
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