Tea With Some Folks

The wind came, and sat on his chair
As flowers bloomed here and there
We sat with the sun, and had some tea
The wind invited too his wife, the breeze

The trees danced, with the autumn air
As the sun sets, with a yellow glare
The smell of mud, just before the rain
From the clouds, from the skies,
We went away, and it came
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Baker Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 9:22 AM
Sounds like a nice, pleasant teatime for the group, Arastu. I enjoyed your poem and will be back to read more. I'm following your poetry now and hope you'll follow mine so we can become friends. Have a great week! A poet in Texas, Bill
Goyal Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 9:30 AM
Thanks for your comment, now we are friends :-) Have a great week too my friend :))
Jones Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 6:55 AM
Ah this is uniquely refreshing and whimsical. I love that the wind has a wife breeze. You think outside the box. Bravo!
Goyal Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 8:20 AM
Many thanks :-)
Empress Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 2:44 AM
This is one of those poems that made me go wow! Awestruck by how clever and creatively you’ve used elements of nature to paint a story so intriguing and soulful! What a brilliant poem this is! I am absolutely loving this, especially “ The wind came, and sat on his chair As flowers bloomed here and there“ so serene! And “ The trees danced, with the autumn air As the sun sets, with a yellow glare“ impeccable!!! A fave for me
Goyal Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 4:47 AM
Thanks! I am very glad that you enjoyed this. Thank you for your kind comment :-)
Sharma  Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 2:37 AM
"The wind invited too his wife, the breeze" That's such a unique thought! This poem feels like a beautifully descriptive story flowing & glowing so evocatively within rhymes, absolutely enjoyed reading this..
Goyal Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 4:47 AM
Thanks :-) I am glad you liked this :))
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