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Tea With Some Folks

The wind came, and sat on his chair As flowers bloomed here and there We sat with the sun, and had some tea The wind invited too his wife, the breeze The trees danced, with the autumn air As the sun sets, with a yellow glare The smell of mud, just before the rain From the clouds, from the skies, We went away, and it came

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Bill Baker

Date: 10/9/2023 9:22:00 AM

Sounds like a nice, pleasant teatime for the group, Arastu. I enjoyed your poem and will be back to read more. I'm following your poetry now and hope you'll follow mine so we can become friends. Have a great week! A poet in Texas, Bill

Arastu Goyal
Date: 10/9/2023 9:30:00 AM

Thanks for your comment, now we are friends :-) Have a great week too my friend :))

Karen Jones

Date: 10/9/2023 6:55:00 AM

Ah this is uniquely refreshing and whimsical. I love that the wind has a wife breeze. You think outside the box. Bravo!

Arastu Goyal
Date: 10/9/2023 8:20:00 AM

Many thanks :-)

Ink Empress

Date: 10/9/2023 2:44:00 AM

This is one of those poems that made me go wow! Awestruck by how clever and creatively you’ve used elements of nature to paint a story so intriguing and soulful! What a brilliant poem this is! I am absolutely loving this, especially “ The wind came, and sat on his chair As flowers bloomed here and there“ so serene! And “ The trees danced, with the autumn air As the sun sets, with a yellow glare“ impeccable!!! A fave for me

Arastu Goyal
Date: 10/9/2023 4:47:00 AM

Thanks! I am very glad that you enjoyed this. Thank you for your kind comment :-)

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/9/2023 2:37:00 AM

"The wind invited too his wife, the breeze" That's such a unique thought! This poem feels like a beautifully descriptive story flowing & glowing so evocatively within rhymes, absolutely enjoyed reading this..

Arastu Goyal
Date: 10/9/2023 4:47:00 AM

Thanks :-) I am glad you liked this :))