Richard Lamoureux Poet Rictameter

Tea Party

My love

                                      Pick some clothing

                                     Your very best will do

                                I've built a gossamer castle

                         Only you are welcome in my kingdom

                           Marvel at the light shining through

                                     You're invited to tea

                                        Will you join me

                                             My love



Just Nine Lines Contest. Sponsored by: Nette
Written by: Richard Lamoureux
September 5th, 2013

visual one was my choice
The dress and jacket are removed so it appears my party was a success.
My IPad doesn't let me use any of the formatting tools I hope this reads ok.

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Poet Destroyer A September 13, 2013 at 10:10 AM Congratulations Richard, ... always love LINDA

Skat A September 12, 2013 at 8:09 AM a precious poem and win ~SKAT~

Moonbee Canady September 11, 2013 at 10:21 PM Excellent courtesy, - good taste, - and private party ... ... Delicious Little Tea for Two Poem ... MoonBee

Kim Merryman September 11, 2013 at 8:48 PM How romantic! Congrats on your win, Richard! Love, Kim

Danesh Morgan September 11, 2013 at 8:14 PM Congrats on your win. Morgan

Tahera Mannan September 10, 2013 at 10:58 PM Super tea party. Many congrats for the win. Richard Lamoureux September 11, 2013 at 6:48 AM Thanks Tahera

Sandra Adams September 10, 2013 at 8:19 PM such a beautiful write Rick...congrats on your win :) Richard Lamoureux September 10, 2013 at 8:37 PM Thanks Sandra, I like the new photo.

Cecilia Macfarlane September 10, 2013 at 8:03 PM This a a darling write. Love it! I shall make banana bread and wear a fancy dress. Hugs Richard Lamoureux September 10, 2013 at 8:40 PM Thanks Cecilia, glad you like it.:0)

Joseph May September 10, 2013 at 5:16 PM ...congrats on your win...nicely penned Richard Lamoureux September 10, 2013 at 8:40 PM Thanks Joseph.

Heather Secrest September 9, 2013 at 5:24 PM very beautiful poem!! a great write! -Heather Richard Lamoureux September 9, 2013 at 5:46 PM Thanks Heather.

Arthur Vaso September 8, 2013 at 8:09 PM There is no better compliment that " I wish I wrote that" Richard Lamoureux September 9, 2013 at 7:20 AM Awww thanks Arthur!

Eileen Manassian September 6, 2013 at 7:11 AM Thanks for the invite...shall I bring cookies to nibble on? ;) Sorry....HAD to tease. Lovely and romantic write, Richard...Perfect settng Richard Lamoureux September 6, 2013 at 6:04 PM Thanks Eilleen.

Manel Gunatillake September 5, 2013 at 10:08 PM I like your party. marvelous! No jacket no dress Must be perfect enjoyment. God Bless you dearest Richard. Thank you for your mail. I am extremely busy these days. My sister had to undergo a spinal surgery, I myself is not in good health Minor though. No mood to pen anything my mind is frozen these days Love and Hugs! take care . My thoughts are always with you and the rest soupies manel Richard Lamoureux September 6, 2013 at 6:05 PM Sorry to hear of your sister, I hope the operation restores her to health.

Dr.Ram Mehta September 5, 2013 at 9:33 PM Gossamer castle seems to be very pleasing Richard Lamoureux September 6, 2013 at 6:06 PM Thanks Dr, Ram.

Poet Tacito September 5, 2013 at 8:00 PM YES! I love this!!!! A simple foundation of innocent pleasures to make a beautiful memory. How awesome! Richard Lamoureux September 6, 2013 at 6:07 PM It's important to set the right mood. Thanks Drake.

Lucilla Carrillo September 5, 2013 at 7:58 PM I know nothing about Ipads, but the poem is great. I know it wasn't for me, but I love tea. Good luck in the contest. I'm back - I'm staying..... Lucilla Richard Lamoureux September 6, 2013 at 6:08 PM Thanks, where did you go?

Seren Roberts September 5, 2013 at 7:14 PM It reads just fine, i am using an Ipad also, not so easy. Great poem Richard .....Seren Richard Lamoureux September 6, 2013 at 6:09 PM Thanks Seren, I like my iPad but it does have some limitations.