Tattered Heart

I give my heart to you freely,
Knowing it's battered and bruised, worn from love's wars.
Please keep it safe; I don't know how it still beats,
Remember, it's the only one I have, with scars so deep and pain so real.

I'm unsure how I survive these days with my bleeding heart.
Please keep it safe; it's a crime to stab a beating heart with a knife.
I don't understand how you say you love me yet hurt me so,
How you claim to love me but are unkind, leaving me to suffer and know.

I hoped you'd be the one to heal my tattered heart,
But instead, I feel only pain in this already damaged part.
If love is patient and kind, why do I feel such pain?
If you're not here to heal me, why remain? There's no safety in this place.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Agustin Avatar
October 21, 2024 at 8:59 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Bartley Avatar
May 22, 2024 at 2:35 PM
Way to go. Way to express those feelings. It's always best to get them out and not hold them in. Way to go. Thanks for sharing.
Stewart Avatar
May 22, 2024 at 4:49 PM
no... thank you for reading
One Avatar
May 22, 2024 at 10:22 AM
Deep and emotive poem..
Stewart Avatar
May 22, 2024 at 1:42 PM
coming from a place of pain
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