Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

Tasting Your Love

Endless passion reflects from you..
Rings of smoke I'm diving through..

Caressing silk line clouds until the're mine..
Honey tasting drops of rain fall oh so fine..

My hands are like holding butter in the sun..
Soft and melted and sweet to the tongue..

A buffet of fruit and juice as my sweet tooth is satisfied..
Every moment in time with you is so loved and gratifying..

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Poet Destroyer A February 4, 2011 at 9:00 AM Oooo to much taste.. continue"... (me on)... hot ... right out of the oven..p.d.

Ravindra K Kapoor January 12, 2011 at 8:17 AM What a wealth of beauty you have poured in these lovely beautiful and lines my friend. Great words beautifully weaved, 'Caressing silk line clouds until the're mine.. Honey tasting drops of rain fall oh so fine' not only this one, even the entire poem is really like a gem. Love and best wishes...Ravindra....Michael J. Falotico

Sara Kendrick January 10, 2011 at 2:58 PM Enjoyed reading your descriptive and passionate work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Your presence at my work brought a ray of sunshine to a cloudy afternoon..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 10, 2011 at 12:28 AM Well just made Ron read this beauty with me as we are home from our romantic getaway wekend and even he is loving it luv.. amazing imagery and metaphors to describe your one true love ... luv... your talent is endless like your romantic nature W.K. from J.G...luv..

Robert Pettit January 9, 2011 at 5:33 PM A nice set of couplets that collectively convey clear descriptiveness.

Daver Austin January 9, 2011 at 10:03 AM Delicious indeed. Must be some dish! LOve, Dave

Nette Onclaud January 9, 2011 at 6:51 AM breathless... you are way ahead of me for february's celevration of the hearts, michael!! enchanting read...do you have spare oxygen?? thanks for coming around! :) nette

Wilma Neels January 9, 2011 at 4:13 AM Oh my you sure are tickling the taste buds with this one Michael ;-) thank you for the smiles always, love Wilma

Carrie Richards January 8, 2011 at 5:58 PM oh my......this is sweet and tasty....."like holding butter in the sun"....it melts my heart! :) So nice, Michael !!

Sarah Hales January 8, 2011 at 5:29 PM perfect xxx

M.I.A . January 8, 2011 at 4:07 PM couldn't agree more with Andrea. Butter! that's the first for me. thanks for stopping by and best wishes always :D

Andrea Dietrich January 8, 2011 at 2:36 PM I just love that third little couplet: like holding butter in the sun.... meltingly sweet!

Joyce Johnson January 8, 2011 at 1:54 PM Meltingly beautiful Michael. You know how to write an enticing love poem.Thank you for your kind omments. Love, Joyce

Stacey Watts January 8, 2011 at 12:48 PM Very beautiful words. I think this is very romantic and passionate. It also flows very well.

Patricia Opel Jaye January 8, 2011 at 11:11 AM good write your words expressed so emotionally romantic Michael Thank you very much for your comments on my poems I look forward to reading much more of your work take care Patricia.