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Taste of Success

Sorrows doors do so boldly open from what seems like eternal longings of life's aim does caress one's thoughts so sweetly only to find bitterness at the taste of its bud leaving one fearful of dreamlike sprouting doors hung with wreathed boughs spotted with poison berries as life opportunities seize to knock on one's psych of soul By Susan Mills

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/22/2010 5:15:00 AM
good
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Date: 5/19/2010 5:20:00 PM
Yes, this one IS rather dark!! Not all opportunity knocks sweetly. Good theme, Susan. Thanks for your welcome comment to me. LUv, andrea
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Date: 5/18/2010 6:27:00 AM
Dark, but a great write on fate
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Date: 5/17/2010 10:31:00 AM
you are a good poet Susan, sounds and taste good love the write, always,..p.d
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