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Inspired by..

and Ephesians 4:31-32 

Get rid of all bitterness, rage and anger, brawling and slander, along with every form of malice. Be kind and compassionate to one another, forgiving each other, just as in Christ God forgave you.

Taste Forgiveness

Seventy seven times
this how much Jesus wants us to forgive...

but how can we forgive
if the hurt or pain they caused us is:
a six feet under the ground depth
a hammer-like cyclic stigma of shame
a freezing fire agonizing the heart and mind?

Tears spill from the eyes
to drench or lessen the pain
yet, to some who aren't relieved
they chose to taste death
rather than pursuing life. . .

Offering the olive branch
of friendship, kindness and forgiveness
though it seems, hard to do so
this to invite  peace
amidst chaos and misery caused by ill deeds.

And if in a way, 
it is not returned
is forgetting a better option?
or should one keep trying--
for persistence a way to win restoration...?

Forgiving
is one of the famous battles
we humans face day by day
as it is between the head and heart
that sometimes these two even is in clash.

Anger, pain and pride
halt us from forgiving
yet, will we choose to sleep in these
be confined and contained in these
when there is a better choice
 
to let go and forgive?

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1:00 pm, February 19, 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Mcdaid Avatar
February 23, 2015 at 9:01 AM
forgiveness is the light of loves beauty the wa\y forward excellent pen olive love the imaginary you used dear pal
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 3:06 AM
thanks much Liam.. ;) I appreciate you stopping by.. :)!
Fraser Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 4:46 AM
Fine poetry Olive, and yes it's better to forgive than allow moments or situations to fester. Have a blessed evening, James :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
February 23, 2015 at 6:55 AM
thanks James.. :) glad you like my poem..
Nunez Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 6:22 AM
Forgiveness releases both the offended and the offender. The offender feels an overwhelming relief, the offended is made free from the recurring hurt. I like the way it ended. The reader is left free to ponder and choose. Awesome 7 Olive. Hugs and smiles...:D Kim
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 11:49 PM
thanks much Kim.. :) indeed it is.. forgiveness is a healing gesture..
Fleming Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 2:18 AM
Between the wood there are wise words carved deeply into the trees! Nicely done, Olive! :) john.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 9:15 AM
thanks much John.. :)! I just elaborated my idea of forgiveness.. :)!
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