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Tart

the orb hung in the haze like a lemon-drop tart tickling my tongue

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Date: 3/6/2022 11:08:00 AM
Beautifully succinct.
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Date: 2/17/2022 2:19:00 AM
Lemon drop tickles my tongue too ! Nice comparison !
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Date: 2/16/2022 10:01:00 AM
Tantalizes the senses!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/17/2022 5:57:00 AM
During the pandemic I made the best lemon cake!!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/16/2022 8:36:00 PM
Should I 'drop some lemons' off at your place next X-mas, Kim? ~ Tan Talize
Date: 2/16/2022 2:27:00 AM
I'm eating your words as I read. :) Cheers - Gary
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/16/2022 8:31:00 PM
Remember not to chew tooooooo long, Gary. People tell me that most folks have a way of souring on lemon. Smiles, Gershon
Date: 2/16/2022 1:52:00 AM
Hi Gershon, I love this, so tight!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/16/2022 8:26:00 PM
Tart, tight, and tingling too, Terry! Thanks! Best wishes, Gershon

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