Susan Gentry Poet Rhyme

Tarnished Reflections

If there were room in your heart for me,
Would things be moved around to see
Exactly where my place might be?

Would there be a rearrangement,
A test of sorts or period of commitment?
Could I replace your deep resentment?

There once was room in your heart for me,
Reflections of all the love you would need,
Tarnished reflections you now want freed.


March 30, 2018

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Robertina B. May 5, 2018 at 11:56 AM Such an excellent poem, Susan.. Was a pleasure to read.. Your poem has really touched me, Susan.. All the best to you!! Susan Gentry May 5, 2018 at 3:22 PM Thank you, Robertina. Same to you.

Heidi Sands April 2, 2018 at 7:04 AM This fits the contest well and is well expressed. Great rhyming too :) Susan Gentry April 2, 2018 at 5:22 PM Thanks Heidi!

Andrea Dietrich April 1, 2018 at 5:03 PM I enjoyed seeing your interpretation of the theme, Susan. Your poem reflects the sad feelings of someone rejected. Susan Gentry April 2, 2018 at 5:22 PM Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed!

Robert Lindley April 1, 2018 at 1:31 PM Love this truly poetic gem of romantic sorrows my friend. YOU HAVE CAPTURED THE DEPTHS AND SORROW SO WELL IN NINE VERSES THAT OBVIOUSLY COME FROM A TRUE POET'S HEART.. A fav.. Susan Gentry April 1, 2018 at 4:41 PM Why thank you, Robert! Such a nice comment. Very much appreciated.

Harry Horsman March 31, 2018 at 3:35 PM this is so sad, yet captivating reading Susan Gentry April 1, 2018 at 11:26 AM Thanks for reading and commenting.

Jack Horne March 31, 2018 at 2:37 PM heartfelt write Susan Gentry April 1, 2018 at 11:25 AM Thanks for reading and commenting!

Janice Canerdy March 31, 2018 at 12:50 PM Oh, yes, hearts can change. Very moving, Susan! Janice Susan Gentry April 1, 2018 at 11:24 AM Thanks Janice. Sweet of you to read and comment.

Line Gauthier March 31, 2018 at 9:01 AM Sweet poem, Susan. Touching. Susan Gentry April 1, 2018 at 11:24 AM Thank you! I appreciate you took time to read and comment.

Silent One March 31, 2018 at 7:41 AM An excellent entry for the contest which bleeds tarnished emotions... Susan Gentry April 1, 2018 at 11:22 AM Thank you!

Daniel Turner March 30, 2018 at 11:41 PM Susan, IMO in order for a person to write a good poem on any subject first and foremost they must know something about it. I believe this poem comes from experience because it reads as if it has come from your heart. Great writing! Susan Gentry April 1, 2018 at 11:22 AM Ahhh thank you! I know we all experience emotional pain, some seem to 'handle' it better than others. Writing sure helps and knowing someone 'gets it' definitely helps too.