Tantalizing Love

Delude me, sweet fantasy: make him appear into my warm and scented sheets
Show me his love, as he caresses my long dark hair 
Form a midnight fire wavering from our eyes and fingertips  
Tonight I shall pluck a star for you from the heavens above -
Polished and twinkling on the edge of something fragile 
Make a wish touched by something pure and everlasting

Cloaked cased in the deep amber moment  
Remind me I am a like that of a small bird waiting to be cradled 
Hold me close with your strength and hunger unknown to you 
Oh tell me that I make you feel right -
As we waver dreamy under a canary moonlight 
The warmth of your breath by my shoulder, oh sight with delight 

Though we are but a mere speck in a cosmos of many 
 We are wrapped alone in a vacuum of glass kept fair 
Now nothing else matters, nothing really could-
When you are in the arms of something so powerful and so good
Delude me, sweet fantasy: make him appear into my warm and scented sheets

(A line taken from Andrew Crisci poem Thursday’s raindrops!) 
By Laura L. McKenzie

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 3/2/2016 8:41:00 AM
What a lovely page with a profound group of words. I am loving every aspect of this piece. Thumbs up friend and a definite 7
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Date: 9/18/2013 2:00:00 PM
amazing win Laura............ luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/14/2013 7:09:00 AM
congrats on your win with this beautiful poem :)
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Date: 9/13/2013 8:23:00 PM
Hi Laura, --A beautiful poem and line... congratulations :-)...xox~ LINDA
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Date: 9/13/2013 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning place Laura xx
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Date: 9/13/2013 8:45:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Laura
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Date: 9/13/2013 8:17:00 AM
Beautiful outstanding piece! Congratulations and thanks for entering my contest.
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Date: 9/13/2013 7:09:00 AM
Laura I have one word "Sensational" congrats on very fine win Shadow x smile
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Date: 8/15/2013 2:25:00 PM
A very rich and enchanting write. I was swept away in this fantasy :)
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Date: 8/14/2013 8:12:00 AM
Stunning & full of heart & passion. This was utterly beautiful! This was a slow dance with desire.
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Date: 8/13/2013 4:53:00 PM
enjoyed gl in contest Shadow x smiles you may want to check some spelling for instance 1st stanza line 4 "pluck " works better than "plunk" hope you don't mind
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Laura Mckenzie
Date: 8/13/2013 4:57:00 PM
no I don't mind speed kills that's the frenzy I get into thanks!
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