Nette Onclaud Poet Tanka

Tank-A-Crostic On Twins

T   twined by destined stars
W  we link through same cosmic 
      thoughts
 I    into aligned waves...
N   nurturing ordained vows,yet
S   soulmates' fate,  never we'll meet .

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Paula Goldsmith July 30, 2024 at 12:46 PM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun write again. Have a blessed day writing away...........

Beata Agustin July 30, 2024 at 7:10 AM Wow! Congrats, Kabayan... Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start till the end... God bless you.

Janice Canerdy July 29, 2024 at 8:08 PM Nette, this beautiful poem almost moved me to tears. CONGRATS on your well-deserved win. Janice

Andrea Dietrich July 29, 2024 at 2:40 PM I loved this one but only did not like the last word of second line going to a new line. Is it because of your cell phone? This one is so mysterious. Congrats, Nette. Nette Onclaud July 29, 2024 at 2:43 PM yes, andie...cellphone limitations...big thanks and huggs

Silent One July 15, 2024 at 2:41 PM Great idea and nicely done..

Jack Horne July 13, 2024 at 10:10 AM what a beautiful acrostic, Nette - so glad to see you back on Soup!

Ink Empress July 13, 2024 at 5:06 AM Deeply moving tanka well written and delivered. Love the word youv chosen here too and also “we link through same cosmic thoughts” yes a connection beyond words can depict. Pleasure reading: best wishes

Paul Callus July 13, 2024 at 12:15 AM This is an excellent Tankacrostic, Nette, and I like the ending. I believe that the decisions we make determines our fate. ~ Best regards // paul

Yann Rolland July 12, 2024 at 10:30 PM so sad final, enjoyed your delicate poem yann

Valsa George July 12, 2024 at 8:04 PM The last line made me sigh. Sometimes such things happen. I know a pair of twins who were made orphans through their mother's death and were fated to live separate and part their ways . So well composed dear Nette.

Joseph May July 12, 2024 at 5:09 PM Sad that they never meet, Very nicely penned

Frank Sheehan July 12, 2024 at 11:24 AM Wonderful piece. Nice rhythm and flow. Enjoyed.

Darlene De Beaulieu July 12, 2024 at 10:38 AM Hello Nette Onclaud, this is beautifully done. Hugs. /Darlene/

Paula Goldsmith July 12, 2024 at 10:36 AM A fun write to read. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a great day..............................