Tim Ryerson Poet Tanka

Tanka You But No Tanka You

got writer's-block-blues
ain't got nothin to enter
it's YOUR fault PD
so here are my conditions:
un-block me and ouch that HURT

why do this to me?
why resort to violence?
(I bruise easily)
so here are my conditions:
drive me to the hospital...

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Saba Khan July 17, 2014 at 6:53 AM sweet win..Congrats :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 17, 2014 at 12:44 AM Oh that's lovely Tim! Congrats on big win!

Robert Lindley July 16, 2014 at 9:39 PM Congrats on your win!! As a one condition man you'll not intrigue the ladies! lol Loved the write and brought a huge smile when reading..

Arlene Smith July 16, 2014 at 8:50 PM Congrats on a great win, Tim! Hugs.. Arlene

Poet Destroyer A July 16, 2014 at 5:53 PM Tim, Congratulations! Thank you for enjoying my contest, stop by my latest blog "Tanka you, but no tanka you :)" If you'd like, or have time! No Matter, enjoy your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Andrea Dietrich July 16, 2014 at 5:49 PM hey congrats, Tim!!!! Soupmail.

Arthur Vaso July 1, 2014 at 2:57 PM Loved this I Tanka you for this fun poem!!

Andrea Dietrich June 25, 2014 at 3:31 PM another fun one. PD will love it!! (unless you mean, she blocked you on comments? hahaha) I will take it to mean pure writer's block. You are never gonna be blocked for long!

Eileen Manassian June 24, 2014 at 9:28 AM Oh Tim..... you and writer's block? Got to be joking! Dang... now you went and ousted me cause she will go for this. As penance you got to read my poor of the week. Mistress may I? Hugs Tim Ryerson June 24, 2014 at 10:00 AM Okay, okay! I admit it! I'm a pervert and I deserve a good spanking (Any volunteers?) Eileen Manassian June 24, 2014 at 9:54 AM Your title had me laughing so hard.... Eileen Manassian June 24, 2014 at 9:44 AM Oh Tim..... you sure about that? Tim Ryerson June 24, 2014 at 9:42 AM I shall do my penance...You sure you don't wanna spank me too? And no, I'm NOT a pervert... Eileen Manassian June 24, 2014 at 9:29 AM Poem of the week. .... stupid phone.