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Tanka You But No Tanka You

got writer's-block-blues ain't got nothin to enter it's YOUR fault PD so here are my conditions: un-block me and ouch that HURT why do this to me? why resort to violence? (I bruise easily) so here are my conditions: drive me to the hospital...

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Saba Khan

Date: 7/17/2014 6:53:00 AM

sweet win..Congrats :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/17/2014 12:44:00 AM

Oh that's lovely Tim! Congrats on big win!

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/16/2014 9:39:00 PM

Congrats on your win!! As a one condition man you'll not intrigue the ladies! lol Loved the write and brought a huge smile when reading..

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/16/2014 8:50:00 PM

Congrats on a great win, Tim! Hugs.. Arlene

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/16/2014 5:53:00 PM

Tim, Congratulations! Thank you for enjoying my contest, stop by my latest blog "Tanka you, but no tanka you :)" If you'd like, or have time! No Matter, enjoy your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2014 5:49:00 PM

hey congrats, Tim!!!! Soupmail.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/1/2014 2:57:00 PM

Loved this I Tanka you for this fun poem!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2014 3:31:00 PM

another fun one. PD will love it!! (unless you mean, she blocked you on comments? hahaha) I will take it to mean pure writer's block. You are never gonna be blocked for long!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/24/2014 9:28:00 AM

Oh Tim..... you and writer's block? Got to be joking! Dang... now you went and ousted me cause she will go for this. As penance you got to read my poor of the week. Mistress may I? Hugs

Tim Ryerson
Date: 6/24/2014 10:00:00 AM

Okay, okay! I admit it! I'm a pervert and I deserve a good spanking (Any volunteers?)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/24/2014 9:54:00 AM

Your title had me laughing so hard....

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/24/2014 9:44:00 AM

Oh Tim..... you sure about that?

Tim Ryerson
Date: 6/24/2014 9:42:00 AM

I shall do my penance...You sure you don't wanna spank me too? And no, I'm NOT a pervert...

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/24/2014 9:29:00 AM

Poem of the week. .... stupid phone.