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Tanka Note

Tanka/Verse __________ heavens door opens far beyond dancing shadows atop blossom hill a magnolia day dream falls upon a heart of love
A Tanka note Born of jasmine love Upon the fervent water Reflecting sun above Flows of peaceful melodies Upon the edge of dream Where wild grass Touch majesty Below the emerald trees We wander on Hand in hand To you the light adore And lie forever In pastel dream To reach Heaven's door

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/12/2018 9:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. This is lovely!
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Date: 7/10/2018 12:10:00 PM
Lovely, Rick. Congrats on your well deserved gold medal win.
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Date: 7/9/2018 8:05:00 PM
Hi Rick.. Another day, another airport. So how do I fight the long sit and wait? Your incredible (and romantic) tanka write of course! You made my delay sing with your creativity!! Come see me if you get a chance.. I'm releasing a secret!
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Date: 7/9/2018 3:22:00 PM
This is very dreamy and softly romantic.A lovely write Rick thank you.
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