Tanka For Chris

Humor gives life joy
Laughter is a balm that soothes
Tell me a good joke...
Make me chuckle make me roar
Take me to hilarious



for Chris's tanka contest
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George   Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 8:21 AM
Laughter is truly the best medicine. Sensational Tanka, Deb. A winner in my books. bfn Elaine
Devonshire Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 5:20 PM
Dear Deb, I really like this tanka. It reminds me of a friend named Chris who brought joy to my life for 18 years before he passed away. Thank you for your kind comment. Love and blessings, Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 4:33 PM
Rereading this one. SO cute it was. Waiting for more new ones from ya!! Oh, I got y our food test result at my blog for you!
Andresen Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 3:36 AM
- So simple .... just with a smile, Deb!! - Love it! - Have a smiley day! - oxox // Anne-Lise :))
Onclaud Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 4:15 PM
enjoyed the charm of this piece, deb.. a winner for me.. huggs
Dietrich Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 6:18 PM
that last line is really awesome. A place named hilarious. I would visit it often!!! great idea for your tanka, lovely lady.
Wegman Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 7:12 AM
Tanka...for this, Deb! Sorry, couldn't resist your Tanka for Chris. :-) Fun stuff. I like it!
Callus Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 5:18 AM
Very well expressed tanka; what is life without humour! // paul
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 3:02 AM
I love to laugh and I adore poetry that takes me there. This is a great tribute! Thanks so much for commenting on my poem as well.
Beaufort Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 8:02 PM
Right on. The best medicine!!
Horne Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 3:40 PM
a sure winner here : )
Onclaud Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 5:38 AM
I love it when a write depicts a crisp feel and you accomplished that in a charming way, deb.. chris will enjoy you wonderful tanka... huggs
Manassian Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 10:15 AM
Oh, this is a beauty. It really is. We all need happiness. Good luck, Deb. Hugs
Manassian Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 10:14 AM
Oh, this is a beauty. It really is. We all need happiness. Good luck, Deb. Hugs
Trifiatis Avatar
March 24, 2014 at 3:30 PM
To me humor is, in a sense the wine of life! Depending of how much one drinks he escalates his joy! Christ must be a very Joyful fellow! Very good Tanka dear Deb! Good luck!
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