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Tangled With You

Love can be a beautiful snare. Let yourself get tangled with me. Plunge into it like it’s a dare! Love can be a beautiful snare. Let’s make some knots! Baby, I swear together we will always be. Love can be a beautiful snare. Let yourself get tangled with me. Aug. 25, 2017 for the T Form Poetry Contest of Broken Wings Word chosen: Tangled

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Eve Roper

Date: 9/9/2017 12:45:00 PM

Andrea, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*

Pipping Stars

Date: 8/31/2017 10:11:00 PM

wow ... your words form true mind catchers ... this is awesome ...

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 8/27/2017 8:49:00 PM

Oh, yes, tying knots, indeed, slippery knots ... how wonderfully sexy and charming - love it, Andrea! <3

Joseph May

Date: 8/27/2017 4:01:00 PM

You do the Triolet so well Andrea...best wishes in the contest

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/26/2017 11:18:00 PM

Hi Andrea, a truly lovely write. I love how the words 'love' and 'tangled' just go together like 'cake and ice cream'.., like it's meant to be... your poem is delicately expressed in a beautiful way. Good luck in the contest :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/26/2017 10:14:00 PM

Oh la la, I will have what your drinking, that sure sounds like fine wine!!!! :) Loved this!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/26/2017 9:46:00 PM

Lovely! Good luck for the contest, Andrea!

Dean Wood

Date: 8/26/2017 9:34:00 PM

Ooh! I love this Andrea. I have never seen this form before. You have done a great job with it. I am still "up in the air" about this contest myself. Good luck to you!

John Fleming

Date: 8/26/2017 7:15:00 PM

This I quite like...all rather engaging in an uncomplicated and endearing sort of way. Certainly grabs you by the arm! :) john