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Tangled Thoughts

The clouds are tangled in the sky
Branches are intertwined in the woods
Tangled thoughts are there to sort through
High and low, looking back and ahead
Scattered leaves fallen on the ground
Some are old and some are new
More to come along soon, this fall
Twirling in the air, with colors to renew

Heidi Sands

8/29/17

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Date: 8/30/2017 8:02:00 AM
Clearing the brush of the mind seems a constant chore, Heidi, Loved the imagery, especially the tangled clouds.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/30/2017 8:36:00 AM
Thank you so much Mike :)
Date: 8/29/2017 4:33:00 PM
I can picture the scene--thoughts probably got untangled by the fallen leaves!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/29/2017 4:34:00 PM
Nice Vijay. Exactly ! Thank you for your kind visits :)
Date: 8/29/2017 3:53:00 PM
Nicely penned Heidi...best wishes
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/29/2017 4:15:00 PM
Thank you Joseph :)

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