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Tangled Thoughts

The clouds are tangled in the sky Branches are intertwined in the woods Tangled thoughts are there to sort through High and low, looking back and ahead Scattered leaves fallen on the ground Some are old and some are new More to come along soon, this fall Twirling in the air, with colors to renew Heidi Sands 8/29/17

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Mike Gentile
Date: 8/30/2017 8:02:00 AM
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Clearing the brush of the mind seems a constant chore, Heidi, Loved the imagery, especially the tangled clouds.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/30/2017 8:36:00 AM
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Thank you so much Mike :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/29/2017 4:33:00 PM
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I can picture the scene--thoughts probably got untangled by the fallen leaves!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/29/2017 4:34:00 PM
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Nice Vijay. Exactly ! Thank you for your kind visits :)
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Joseph May
Date: 8/29/2017 3:53:00 PM
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Nicely penned Heidi...best wishes
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/29/2017 4:15:00 PM
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Thank you Joseph :)

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