Tangled in Twilight

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11/09/24

Under cyanic horizon Sun sinks down, bids bye. Twilight is welcomed by quiet evening sky. In V-shaped design eager egrets to fly. Sadness prevailing ! cawing crows cease to cry. Me tangled in twilight , mesmerized. Dusty dusk, wearing misty mask coming nigh. To reflect sunrays soon Moon is sure to try. Twilight will also tend to fade , feeling shy. My forgotten past love whispering to sigh . Me tangled in twilight , hypnotized. Sun completes it's daily path from East to West Weary birds stop chirping, seeking rest at nest. Glow worms about to start glow warm at its best Memories of amour are my best asset. Me tangled in twilight, astounded. After watching calm tranquil twilight. Morose evening merging to turquoise night. Bygone days, not always, brilliant bright. Assessing loss or gain in grief and delight. Me tangled in twilight, felt wounded.

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Valsa George

Date: 11/13/2024 4:43:00 AM

Hi Anisha, really enjoyed your poem and your reactions to twilight. In the luminous glow of the setting sun and the remarkable changes in the sky, you feel mesmerized and astounded, but wounded by the thoughts of light fading out and darkness overpowering.