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Tall Towers and Deep Wells

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Tall Towers and Deep Wells


My love, come and feast on my two round mountains
whose perky tops are as dark as red roses,	
and that are as soft and round as marshmellows.
They stand tall and erect as a giant tower.
Thy pleasurable tongue may be plunged into this deep well
where sweet nector is a neverending supply.

Luscious and delicious there is always a supply.
So when you need satisfying, come to these mountains. 
On top of these mountains you will have great access to this well
and when you slide in, it's as velvety and as soft as roses.
You spread these rose pedals with your giant tower.
I melt under your touch as toasted marshmellows.

When you eat these delicious marshmellows,
you'll surely know that I have more than a vast supply.
Your length makes me think of a tall tower
and underneath your tall tower hangs two round mountains.
They bump against my well as gently as roses
and bring rivers gushing into my sweet well.

Your tower and mountains satisfy my deep well.
It's as though I'm filled with sweet marshmellows.
As you taste and feast you will realize I smell like sweet roses.
You must give and must supply and I must give and must supply.
Just remember to always come to these high mountains
Where my well is filled with marshmellows from your tall tower

Nothing is as firm or as tall as your tower
and when you're near me you seem to gravitate to my mountains and well.
With your tower in my well you gently kiss my mountains.
My dark red rose petals swell as you explode sweet marshmellows.
There is no shortage here but a great supply.
All of this love takes place in our bed of sweet roses.

What is more fragrant than a bed of roses
or more delightful than to be gently entered by a giant tower?
Knowing your length I'm sure you would be able to supply.
There's such an awesome craving in my deep well.
And only you can supply me with sweet marshmellows.
Please fill that longing and pleasure these mountains.

Come smell these sweet roses and drink from my well.
I'll play with and taste your tower and you can feed me your marshmellows.
For you have an unending supply which you can release on my mountains.


Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 6/28/2014 9:26:00 AM
Very interesting write on the mountains, and congrats on the win, Noelle
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Noelle Devereau
Date: 6/30/2014 2:59:00 PM
Thank you so much for the congrats...Noelle
Date: 6/27/2014 9:11:00 AM
congrats on a fine win ...Seren
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Noelle Devereau
Date: 6/30/2014 2:59:00 PM
Thank you so much for the congrats...Noelle
Date: 6/27/2014 8:46:00 AM
Noelle, congrats on a difficult challenge win. Mohan
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Noelle Devereau
Date: 6/30/2014 2:58:00 PM
Thank you so much for the congrats...Noelle
Date: 6/1/2014 9:12:00 AM
I have always enjoyed my time exploring mountains. This is a very erotic piece.
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Noelle Devereau
Date: 6/1/2014 4:16:00 PM
Yes exploring can be fun...thanks so much for the comment...Noelle
Date: 5/31/2014 1:22:00 AM
How will I sleep after reading this!!!!! Great sensual write!!!
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Noelle Devereau
Date: 6/1/2014 4:14:00 PM
Hope you got some sleep...thanks so much for the comment...Noelle
Date: 5/30/2014 10:53:00 PM
Very sensual Noelle...Great use of metaphors....Tim
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Noelle Devereau
Date: 5/30/2014 11:06:00 PM
Thanks for the comments...Noelle