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Talking With Venus

Standing on a cliff high above
the noise.
Reaching for the star I have
wished upon.
Oh! Venus, Goddess high above
can you talk to me about spiritual
love?
Can I just reach it once and hold
it close to me?
So I can see my wish coming true
clearly.
Puffy white clouds entertain our frame 
of time as I sit and talk with Venus in
her celestial confine.

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Funom Makama Date: 5/28/2015 10:22:00 AM Great lines with majestic eloquence.. Your meandering of words still did not prevent your peice from giving out its message. This is an absolute 7! Login to Reply Sharon Gulley Date: 5/28/2015 8:12:00 PM Wow such awesome of a comment you gave Funom, Thank you so very much for such kind words of encouragement. It is always nice to hear that someone enjoys your work. I enjoy your work as well and will be back to read more. Thank you also for the awesome rating. Best always....Sharon g.

Wally Flint Date: 5/26/2015 8:10:00 PM A very visually striking poem Sharon. Good job! Login to Reply Sharon Gulley Date: 5/27/2015 8:11:00 AM Thank you Wally so very much.

Arthur Vaso Date: 5/2/2015 11:34:00 AM Very enchanting! Login to Reply Sharon Gulley Date: 5/4/2015 10:00:00 AM Thank you, Arthur. Glad you enjoyed this write...God Bless.....Sharon G. :)

Gary Bateman Date: 4/29/2015 4:58:00 PM Hello Sharon!! . . . I'm back!! I really like your "Talking with Venus" here. I really like how your pursue your goal here in the verses of being able to ". . . sit and talk with Venus in here celestial confine." The image of being on a cliff and reaching for the star impresses the reader with the focus you're looking for. Very Well-Done and a most definite "7" from me. Best Wishes, Gary Login to Reply Gary Bateman Date: 5/1/2015 10:45:00 AM Have no doubts Sharon . . . you are doing very well!! Just keep writing and stay positive about your work always. This is exactly what I try to do everyday. Write! Write! Write! Best Wishes Always, Gary Sharon Gulley Date: 5/1/2015 9:32:00 AM Thank you so very much, Gary. It is always so nice to hear from you. Thank you for all your support and wisdom. I also want to thank you for the wonderful rating, makes me proud that I am moving forward on the learning forms ladder, ha, ha, ha :). God Bless.....Sharon G.