Teddy Kimathi Poet Free verse

Talking Eyes

I see your eyes talking to me;
only my eyes can feel your eyes'
whisper. The rest of your face
is hidden like the sun in the clouds,
but your eyes tell it all.

Your eyes tell what you want;
a kiss, touch of my hands,
touch of my skin, 
warmth of my breath....

Your eyes' stare are steady,
bold, and deep.

They signal that you are ready
for a passionate moment,
in the ocean of red rose petals,
surrounded by faint, amber lights...

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Stanley Carter September 8, 2016 at 8:18 PM very nice

Sunita U.D Palawon July 24, 2016 at 10:51 PM The pic beautiful and the eyes expression...OOOh! So nicely expressed. Congrats! :D Sunita Teddy Kimathi July 25, 2016 at 3:00 AM Thank you so much, Sunita!! *^_^* Eyes speak a lot, if we only learn to see their messages...

Richard Lamoureux July 24, 2016 at 7:54 PM I can see how she could make you happy, she's gorgeous. Congrats on your win. Teddy Kimathi July 25, 2016 at 2:58 AM Hehehe. Indeed, that's a jewel to behold.... Thank you so much Richard, for your kind applause!! ;-)

Royal Ninja July 24, 2016 at 6:00 PM Thank you Teddy Teddy Kimathi July 25, 2016 at 2:56 AM Welcome Royal!! *_^

Angeline Haikutwinkle July 11, 2016 at 8:41 PM Beautiful sensual write Teddy Kimathi July 12, 2016 at 5:15 AM Thank you so much, Angeline!! *^_^*

D.W. Rodgers July 1, 2016 at 5:05 PM The eyes have it, Motion carried. Teddy Kimathi July 12, 2016 at 5:14 AM Hehehehe. No objections. ;-)

Dineen Williams Gault June 27, 2016 at 8:46 AM The eyes are so expressive, and you detailed the expanse of what they can convey quite well here. Congratulations! Teddy Kimathi July 12, 2016 at 5:13 AM You are very right, Dineen. Thanks so much for your applause, enjoying my piece!! *^_^*

Seosamh De Burca June 23, 2016 at 8:22 AM Great poem and imagery, congrats on your win Teddy Kimathi June 24, 2016 at 5:21 PM Thank you so much Seosamh!! :-)

Sara Chansarkar June 21, 2016 at 6:19 PM Beautiful tribute to beautiful eyes! Teddy Kimathi June 22, 2016 at 2:36 AM Thanks Sara!! *^_^*

Nette Onclaud June 20, 2016 at 8:33 AM oog, the windows of the soul!.. very eye-catching read, teddy..huggs Teddy Kimathi June 20, 2016 at 10:51 AM Thank you so much for seeing my work, and enjoying it Nette!! *^_^*