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The mellow chords of a cello draw tears as its bow vibrates a combo of strings. For when that sound found its way to my ears, it tore my heart apart and clipped my wings. The violin, akin to the fiddle, carries both cheers and fears within its pitch. And, its strings probe my mind like a riddle granted an hour of power to bewitch. French horns, like brass thorns, both piercing and sharp, float above each note, and I'm left reeling. And the sweet bleat of a lingering harp haunts and taunts with a heavenly feeling. Orchestras, on the whole, leave me in awe, every sound bound to a musician's will. Perfect, and yet imperfect, like scrimshaw, a way to convey both talent and skill. (Internal Rhyme) 11-03-2020

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Date: 1/30/2022 2:51:00 AM
Great writing. Congratulations!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/30/2022 8:59:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/1/2020 4:39:00 PM
Enjoyed this marriage of classical music and poetry, Emile. Your rhymes were all clever and original and unexpected, I especially like mellow/cello, and violin/akin. A double congratulations for your contest win, and for reaching the exalted spot of Best New Poem! I'm very happy for you, my friend ~ John
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Date: 12/2/2020 6:52:00 AM
Thanks so much John, as usual, you have managed to bring a smile to my day my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/1/2020 12:35:00 PM
Great write! Lovely. I agree music and poetry do tend to seek each other out <3
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Date: 12/1/2020 1:47:00 PM
Thanks Jessie, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/20/2020 10:07:00 AM
A beautiful orchestration of rhyme and poetry, Emile! You surely conducted this orchestra to a place on the winners list with your talent and skill! I too love the cello and the French horn. Made me think of Wagner's Tannhauser. All the best my friend.
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Date: 11/20/2020 12:09:00 PM
Thanks Sam, music and poetry tend to seek each other out my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/19/2020 8:49:00 AM
Beautiful write Emile, Congrats on your win..
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Date: 11/19/2020 3:46:00 PM
Thanks Joseph, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/8/2020 8:16:00 AM
Reverberant Emile. Nicely done! Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/8/2020 9:50:00 AM
Thanks Linda, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/5/2020 10:28:00 AM
You know how much I love internal rhymes and also music, the combination of these two creates a medley of emotions, I love this write Emile, into my faves it goes!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/5/2020 12:10:00 PM
Thanks John, I always enjoy your visits my friend, Emile.

Book: Shattered Sighs