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Tale of Two Features

A certain feature
      on a creature
   dooms it to extinction

   Exact same thing
      in writing ~
   a mark of fine distinction

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Terry Flood

July 10, 2023 at 4:24 PM

A point well made… except that I’ve been told it’ll be global warming that sees me off… rather like the Stegosaur… sorry, I have a thing about the Stegosaur!

Michael Tor

July 10, 2023 at 2:15 PM

Great analogy share here my friend...

Kim Rodrigues

July 10, 2023 at 5:44 AM

Hmm…

Paula Goldsmith

July 9, 2023 at 11:53 AM

I hope you are Not doomed to extinction. Your writings are a mark of Fine distinction. Keep your pen working overtime. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Bill Baker

July 9, 2023 at 7:45 AM

Thought provoking poetry, Gershon. Thanks for making me think while I'm waking up. Bill

Suzanne Delaney

July 9, 2023 at 6:45 AM

I guess ee must have had something…..his poems were not doomed to extinction. LOL SuZ

John Lawless

July 9, 2023 at 4:59 AM

Perhaps I may just leave a few interesting "pen scratchings" to intrigue the poetologists of a future "arch-ego-ologist"

Joseph P. DiMino

July 9, 2023 at 2:12 AM

Indeed -- of the great writers, outside of William, how many of their works are held in constant exteem?~just a few.

Vickey Rhymer

July 9, 2023 at 12:30 AM

Evolving to survive In form What of the one trick poney ? One trick was all that horse could do Can it be denied the heat of his heart is shining through?.........some words and phrasing stolen directly from the wording of one Paul Simon.