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Taking the Boat

A brand-new ferry leaves its dock One block from where I live. It feels like it’s a present That the city chose to give. For I can ride downtown upon The river’s gentle swells, Escaping all the subway’s crowds, The litter and the smells. I tried it out today and found It pleasant, fun and fast, Absorbing different urban views As we went chugging past. Right now it’s like a secret For the lucky who have scored But I’m sure when word gets out, It may be hard to get on board.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/21/2018 8:37:00 PM
I like the Staten Island Ferry a lot. Where does this ferry leave from? it sounds nice from your poem. Happy New Year! L'Shanah Tovah! B'Shalom Matthew Anis
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Date: 8/21/2018 8:23:00 PM
Nice to read about such an development in NYC … If it gets too crowded, just call an Uber Ferry. LOL. So enjoy your extraordinary focus on the ordinary, Ilene! ~ Gershon
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Date: 8/21/2018 6:44:00 PM
Oh what a winning last part you put on this. Right now you are loving the secret. I think this sounds so awesome!!
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Date: 8/21/2018 4:39:00 PM
it sounds quite idyllic Ilene, enjoy it whilst it is relatively quiet!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/21/2018 3:30:00 PM
Such a lovely verse, now I'm jealous of your secret ferry!
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Date: 8/21/2018 3:25:00 PM
I'm sure it will once word spreads. Wonderfully written Ilene
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