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Taking One's Leave

I walk into the night And leave the world behind, The fading of the light, The stumbling of the blind I seek another path A road that has no goal But the semblance of the truth The yearning of my soul. The moon holds centre stage Beyond the trellis trees The city lights engage But can no longer please A mind grown tired of life A heart no longer strong Tired of this world of strife Return where they belong The wind picks up the leaves And gusts across the park Where silent shadows heave And vanish in the dark. What held us here so long? What fantasy prevailed? The plans we lived among Have long since been derailed. And so I take my leave I say to all goodbye There is no call to grieve There is no need to cry. I seek another path A road that has no goal But the semblance of my truth The yearning of my soul

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Date: 10/5/2020 11:13:00 AM
So many roads, so many options... Thank God for that. This is a poignant poem with a good rhyme scheme. God bless you, Carrick.
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Date: 9/30/2020 6:28:00 PM
I can relate to this. I've taken a different path as well.Very vivid and well thought. I'll definitely read more of your poetry. Peace, Angie
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Date: 9/24/2020 4:09:00 PM
Hello Carrick Townsend, I would suggest to take the road not taken. Then see where it leads you. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Date: 9/19/2020 12:52:00 AM
Beautiful like the pattern xx
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Date: 9/16/2020 12:06:00 PM
Carrick - congratulations on your win. A really well penned poem, wonderful, David
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Date: 9/10/2020 5:04:00 PM
I simply love the stanza of "the wind picks up the leaves/and gusts across the park...what fantasy prevailed?/have long since been derailed... so full of humble yearning as a whole. Congrats on your win. a fav.
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Date: 9/10/2020 5:41:00 AM
We all reach that point in life where we feel it is time to move on. Congrats on your top win, Carrick. John
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