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Taken Me Down - For You - Ii

I've written the words, and finally collapsed at your feet. I've broken my pen, as well as my heart, my own fault, holding on to the edge of imagination, just a little too long, my grip finally slipped, and I've landed deep in the middle of the reality. I am rendered speechless, yet I cannot take the words back, and don't want to. but I've collapsed at your feet, unrequitted love, has finally taken me down.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/14/2011 10:16:00 AM
Enjoying reading the very diverse poetry here today. I am happy to see you have shared a bit of your excellent writing with us today Ian. Heres hoping you have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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