Taken by Storm

clear lake… solitude… evergreen circumference… sky-brows twitch… lightning…

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Karen Croft

Date: 6/27/2024 5:27:00 PM

I can imagine being in a boat when this happens

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/27/2024 7:52:00 PM

Better start to 'row, row, row your boat,' Karen! Thanks visiting my site, and have a great Friday! ~ gw

Paul Willason

Date: 6/25/2024 6:41:00 AM

Just superbly original ....sky brows...take out a patent on this image my friend. Not many poets could wrestle that one to the page.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/25/2024 6:14:00 PM

I 'went to the mat' for that one, Paul. lol. ~ Heh V. Waite

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/24/2024 7:37:00 AM

Good one. I think my eyebrows would twitch if I was out when the lightning strike happened unexpectedly. Thanks for sharing your creativity with us. Sara K

John Lawless

Date: 6/24/2024 5:58:00 AM

...I shall forever see thunder clouds as "sky brows" twitching .. nice one Gershon

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/25/2024 6:14:00 PM

Twitch and itch, I say!