Take Wing

Breathlessly wait. Autumn’s chilling winds pulsate through trees, rustling multi-hued leaves, casting them to nature’s floor. Spread your broad wings and try to catch the currents, gliding with grace, emulating birds in flight. In dreams I flap my arms, soaring over continents. Why, look, see the outline of each state – color coded, an atlas below. Laugh at the irony; this is the only view we have without wings. Stationary locations we long to supersede. Take me to new lands, higher and higher I sail, hoping to reach the loftiest peaks. Even Mount Everest is possible to escalate with little effort by air. Desire to break free of worldly ills, wars, famine, political turmoil, allows us to release negative energy. Temperatures, weather conditions - cruise above these, enjoy the albeit too brief lift. Flight, whether in dreams, free-falling, hang-gliding, permits us to reach otherwise unattainable goals. Cut those threads that cause you to remain earthbound; no umbilical cord is needed when you simply take wing.
*Written for the "Flying" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 10:23 AM
Congragtulations on the win in the contest,Carolyn
M V Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 1:46 AM
Congratulations!Congratulations!Nice verse,Carolyn
Brown Avatar
September 6, 2011 at 10:33 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Flying" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 1:53 PM
"In dreams I flap my arms, soaring over continents." Carolyn, I have done this very thing in dreams myself.. at first when I started having these dreams, it was difficult to even get off the ground. However, now I don't even have to flap, I just soar wherever my thoughts take me. Congratulations on a beautiful write. Agape, Moses
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September 5, 2011 at 11:57 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the "FLYING" poetry contest sponsored by Debbie Guzzi CR
Williams Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 3:54 AM
hey Carolyn congrats on your win,simply adorable..David
Villanueva Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 5:11 PM
CONGRATULATIONS~~~really amazing write and this is a well-deserved win my friend~~~smile~~~
Ramage Avatar
September 1, 2011 at 10:08 PM
Great poem, so creative, well done. Lee
Song Avatar
September 1, 2011 at 10:16 AM
Goosebumps from this poem, Carolyn. The title is so original as tho it should be coined a new phrase--take wing! Best to u this day! Hope all is well. Gwendolen
Horne Avatar
August 31, 2011 at 6:57 AM
I love the vivid imagery in this piece, my friend - a sure winner
Poet Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 3:51 AM
An excellent take on the contest theme'fly'with wonderful imagery...best wishes.
Kendrick Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 5:11 PM
Good luck in the contest with this creative work..Reads like winning material to me..I have had dreams about flying at times in my life..This one is filled with great imaginative ideas..Thanks for stopping by my work and commenting..Sara
Bawden Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 1:34 PM
Everybody at some point dreams of flying. You have written something beautiful and utterly relate-able. Well done. x
Dufresne Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 9:31 AM
Excellent portrayal of what it feels like and why we want to fly...brought me back immediately to my flying dreams that I so love.... and upon awakening feel so elated. Well work time....gotta fly!
Roberts Avatar
August 28, 2011 at 5:05 PM
wonderful ! good luck in the contest Carolyn
Neels Avatar
August 28, 2011 at 4:54 PM
An absolute stunner Carolyn, really enjoyed this journey with your through your words. Wishing you all the best for the contest :) love Wilma
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August 28, 2011 at 4:08 PM
A beautiful write.... I have missed your poetry and alot of others lately.... Hope all is well with your new venture... love Michael
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