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Take the Back Road

I’ll take the back road; it is lovely and less traveled; the briers run high against naked tree bark. Around the bend the road is graveled- with a canopy of foliage making pathway dark. The briers run high against naked tree bark; keeping all wild predators - hidden dangers at bay. With a canopy of foliage making pathway dark; I continually hope I am not mistaken for prey. Keeping all wild predators - hidden dangers at bay; if an abiding effort is on daily bases. I continually hope I am not mistaken for prey, as long as I do not travel in all the wrong places. If an abiding effort is on daily bases; around the bend the road is graveled. As long as I do not travel in all the wrong places; I’ll take the back road; it is lovely and less traveled. Copyright © 2011 By Caryl S. Muzzey Sixth Place Winner ~ "Back to Back” Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Paula Swanson April 4, 2011

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Date: 3/31/2011 6:33:00 AM
Loved reading this and enjoyed it as I am one of those who always travels on such back roads. It brought to memory the less traveled winding leafy forest pathways. Love, Gautami
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Date: 3/21/2011 10:23:00 AM
A heartfelt congratulations to you Caryl for your win in Paula's contest "Back To Back". Love, Carol
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Date: 3/21/2011 8:45:00 AM
The back road may have briars, but it is a lovely one indeed. Predators can be found on any road. Your poem reminded me of "The Road Less Traveled." Congratulations on your win in Paula's contest, Caryl. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/20/2011 12:46:00 PM
An awesome write here Caryl!Congrats on your win--kashinath
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Date: 3/19/2011 12:49:00 AM
love this Caryl, brings back so many memories, excellent Pantoum, congrats for this winner. Harry
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Date: 3/18/2011 8:22:00 PM
Many warm congrats for this win dear Caryl.
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Date: 3/18/2011 3:45:00 PM
Congrats Caryl on your wonderful win in Paula's Pantoum contest.. a vibrant write my friend.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 3/18/2011 12:53:00 PM
You have given a sense of mystery and danger, in that back road so traveled. Well done, Caryl !! Loved this one!!
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Date: 3/18/2011 11:22:00 AM
An awesome job my Man Caryl, great to see you near the top. Congratulations on your worthy sixth place victory. Enjoy! Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/17/2011 2:24:00 PM
Enjoyed this one..That road less traveled can be great..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon.Thanks for stopping by...I posted a new blog..Sara
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Date: 3/16/2011 10:54:00 PM
An interesting concept, writing about this back road that you seem to know so well. It sounds like a beautiful off the track kind of road!! Good luck in the contest, Caryl
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