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Here, my gift, My hand in yours. Hear, my promise, No weapons of war. Here, my heart, Full of love and peace. The time is here, It's Christmas Eve! When every hand is held None can go astray The whole world is at peace On this Christmas day Here, I stand. Full of love! Here, I am! Connecting us There you are, Let us be, I take your hand A gift of peace. When every hand is held None can go astray The whole world is at peace On this Christmas day Here, is faith Dividing us Here is color Dividing us Join together Find that common ground Hear the way our unity Can make a joyful sound When every hand is held None can go stay The whole world is at peace On this Christmas day

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Date: 12/10/2024 3:12:00 AM
A belated congratulations on POTD on your excellent Christmas Wish for world peace Crystal...Hugs
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/10/2024 10:44:00 AM
Ty Maria!! Xo
Date: 12/8/2024 6:34:00 PM
Back to congratulate you Crystol. I'm so happy to see your beautiful poem received the POTD :-) Hugs Anne xox
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/10/2024 10:43:00 AM
Tysm! Xo
Date: 12/8/2024 5:18:00 PM
' When every hand is held, none can go stay. ' So true, Crystol. Especially when we're all going down the path of peace. You have such a wonderful heart. Thank you for being here, for being you. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/10/2024 10:43:00 AM
Oh Brandy I'm one of many, you have a big heart! Ty for stopping in! Xo
Date: 12/8/2024 5:13:00 PM
Dear Crystol, and I hear you and pray with you that we find that elusive peace and once and for all join hand in hand as one people under God. A wonderful and inspirational poem and so deserving POTD! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/10/2024 10:42:00 AM
Ty Daniel! If we each hold one hand... God bless! Xo
Date: 12/8/2024 4:03:00 PM
Dear Crystol, how wonderful! This is the perfect poem I want to read and recite on Christmas Eve. A huge congratulations on your POTD! Merry Christmas and A Happy New Year to you and your family!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/10/2024 10:41:00 AM
Same to you and yours! Ty! Xo
Date: 12/8/2024 2:27:00 PM
Crystol such a wonderful Poem by you. Big Congratulations for receiving POTD. God bless you...
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/10/2024 10:41:00 AM
Tysm! Xo
Date: 12/8/2024 12:09:00 PM
I wrote this after writing, "Twas THE NIGHT BEFORE CHRISTMAS in POETRY SOUP". I had it in my mind it would be the song we all wrote in that poem. I know yall could do much much better than this but it was just the idea. Merry Christmas POETRY Soup! A thousand blessings for peace and goodwill ! Xo
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Date: 12/8/2024 11:04:00 AM
Crystol, a lovely refreshing sentiment particularly in these divisive times in which we live. Congratulations on your POTD! May the Christmas season bring you and yours the best of cheers!! ~Anaya
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I Am Anaya
Date: 12/8/2024 2:41:00 PM
xo!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/8/2024 11:58:00 AM
RBAY Anaya! Merry Merry so merry lol! :)xoxo
Date: 12/8/2024 10:57:00 AM
I don't generally comment on holiday themed poems but I can support your wish for peace. It won't happen on Christmas Day for sure, but the Prince of Peace is just around the bend. Enjoy your day
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/8/2024 11:56:00 AM
Hey you never know! The false peace comes first though, so your probably right since we will have at least 5 months of his evil mess...6th trump, 6th seal, 6th vital. The true Princeof Peace comes at the 7th! Woo! Thanks for commenting although it's not your scene! Xoxo
Date: 12/8/2024 10:25:00 AM
A great Christmas piece, Crystol, and congrats on POTD.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/8/2024 11:52:00 AM
Ty Jim!! Xoxo
Date: 12/8/2024 10:05:00 AM
Yeah! What a beautiful poem. You are a truly talented poet. Congratulations on your POTD!!! Certainly not your best but definitely festive. I still haven't received my book ... errrr, I just can't wait. Many Blessings.
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Benjamin Bartley
Date: 12/8/2024 7:20:00 PM
My book arrives Tuesday. You know, the poetrysoup book. That was just published. Certainly, at least one of your poems are in it. And yes, you are an inspiration!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/8/2024 11:52:00 AM
Awe that's super sweet... no not my favorite either but it is what it is lol! I'm not sure I'm following you about the book? Am I missing something? ( I usually do lol) Merry Merry xo!
Date: 12/8/2024 8:12:00 AM
Beautiful refrain and beautiful poem, Crystol, and congratulations on POTD.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/8/2024 11:49:00 AM
Thank you Gershon! Merry Merry xoxo
Date: 12/8/2024 7:10:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD honor dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/8/2024 11:48:00 AM
Cheers!! Tysm!! Merry Merry! Xoxo!
Date: 12/8/2024 6:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a blessed day with your win....................
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/8/2024 11:39:00 AM
Thanks my friend, Paula! Merry Merry! Xoxo!
Date: 12/8/2024 5:54:00 AM
A beautiful poem with lovely sentiments.. Congratulations on POTD.. Well deserving.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/8/2024 11:39:00 AM
Tysm SO! Merry Merry! Xoxo!
Date: 12/8/2024 4:04:00 AM
"When every hand is held None can go stay" - A very valuable Christmas tiding to the humanity today. Congratulations!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/8/2024 11:37:00 AM
I think so too Christuraj... what an unusual and lovely name! What does it mean? Merry Merry xoxo!
Date: 12/8/2024 3:33:00 AM
Full of Christmas spirit. Girl, you bring ya ukulele and I’ll bring my pan flute and let’s go wassailing. A lovely verse. Congrats on POTD.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/8/2024 11:35:00 AM
Awe thanks Keith! Pan flute, huh? I knew you were super cool! ;) <3 I only figured out the definition of wassailing last year! Lol ty for the encouragement! Merry Merry! Xoxo!
Date: 12/8/2024 3:15:00 AM
Crystol, a beautiful poem and message, congratulations on POTD.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/8/2024 11:33:00 AM
Tysm Tania! Merry Merry! Xoxo!
Date: 12/8/2024 2:50:00 AM
Wonderful poetry Crystol, all we need for Christmas is peace on earth and the joining of hands all over the world. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/8/2024 11:33:00 AM
Thank you! Merry Merry! Xoxo!
Date: 12/8/2024 2:05:00 AM
“When every hand is held None can go astray The whole world is at peace On this Christmas Day” what a beautiful lyric! Wonderfully written full of the reason for the season! Great job Crystal congratulations on your potd honor!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/8/2024 11:30:00 AM
Oh tysm Karen! It definitely feels like an honor to me! Ty for your sentiments! Merry Merry! Xoxo!
Date: 12/8/2024 1:20:00 AM
Congratulations to you on the honour of POTD Crystol. Hope you have a happy and peaceful Christmas. Tom
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/8/2024 11:29:00 AM
Ty Tom! It's feels like such an honor to receive potd! Merry Merry! Xo
Date: 12/6/2024 10:11:00 PM
Beauiful lyrical poem Crystol - we all wish the whole world to be at peace for all time. Merry Christmas in advance. Hugs
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/7/2024 10:10:00 AM
Thank you Maria! Rbay! Xo
Date: 12/6/2024 4:26:00 PM
Beautifully written Dear Crystol and your fifth stanza is so true. Smiles & Hugs to you Sweet poet :-) A Fav for me
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/6/2024 6:11:00 PM
Oh tysm! I'm feeling the love this Christmas! Xoxo

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