Take My Hand


Here, my gift, My hand in yours. Hear, my promise, No weapons of war. Here, my heart, Full of love and peace. The time is here, It's Christmas Eve! When every hand is held None can go astray The whole world is at peace On this Christmas day Here, I stand. Full of love! Here, I am! Connecting us There you are, Let us be, I take your hand A gift of peace. When every hand is held None can go astray The whole world is at peace On this Christmas day Here, is faith Dividing us Here is color Dividing us Join together Find that common ground Hear the way our unity Can make a joyful sound When every hand is held None can go stay The whole world is at peace On this Christmas day
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Williams Avatar
December 10, 2024 at 3:12 AM
A belated congratulations on POTD on your excellent Christmas Wish for world peace Crystal...Hugs
Woods Avatar
December 10, 2024 at 10:44 AM
Ty Maria!! Xo
Sangster - K Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 6:34 PM
Back to congratulate you Crystol. I'm so happy to see your beautiful poem received the POTD :-) Hugs Anne xox
Woods Avatar
December 10, 2024 at 10:43 AM
Tysm! Xo
Nicole Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 5:18 PM
' When every hand is held, none can go stay. ' So true, Crystol. Especially when we're all going down the path of peace. You have such a wonderful heart. Thank you for being here, for being you. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Woods Avatar
December 10, 2024 at 10:43 AM
Oh Brandy I'm one of many, you have a big heart! Ty for stopping in! Xo
Rodgers Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 5:13 PM
Dear Crystol, and I hear you and pray with you that we find that elusive peace and once and for all join hand in hand as one people under God. A wonderful and inspirational poem and so deserving POTD! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Woods Avatar
December 10, 2024 at 10:42 AM
Ty Daniel! If we each hold one hand... God bless! Xo
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December 8, 2024 at 4:03 PM
Dear Crystol, how wonderful! This is the perfect poem I want to read and recite on Christmas Eve. A huge congratulations on your POTD! Merry Christmas and A Happy New Year to you and your family!
Woods Avatar
December 10, 2024 at 10:41 AM
Same to you and yours! Ty! Xo
Tor Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 2:27 PM
Crystol such a wonderful Poem by you. Big Congratulations for receiving POTD. God bless you...
Woods Avatar
December 10, 2024 at 10:41 AM
Tysm! Xo
Woods Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 12:09 PM
I wrote this after writing, "Twas THE NIGHT BEFORE CHRISTMAS in POETRY SOUP". I had it in my mind it would be the song we all wrote in that poem. I know yall could do much much better than this but it was just the idea. Merry Christmas POETRY Soup! A thousand blessings for peace and goodwill ! Xo
Anaya Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 11:04 AM
Crystol, a lovely refreshing sentiment particularly in these divisive times in which we live. Congratulations on your POTD! May the Christmas season bring you and yours the best of cheers!! ~Anaya
Anaya Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 2:41 PM
xo!
Woods Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 11:58 AM
RBAY Anaya! Merry Merry so merry lol! :)xoxo
Slaughter Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 10:25 AM
A great Christmas piece, Crystol, and congrats on POTD.
Woods Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 11:52 AM
Ty Jim!! Xoxo
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December 8, 2024 at 10:05 AM
Yeah! What a beautiful poem. You are a truly talented poet. Congratulations on your POTD!!! Certainly not your best but definitely festive. I still haven't received my book ... errrr, I just can't wait. Many Blessings.
Bartley Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 7:20 PM
My book arrives Tuesday. You know, the poetrysoup book. That was just published. Certainly, at least one of your poems are in it. And yes, you are an inspiration!
Woods Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 11:52 AM
Awe that's super sweet... no not my favorite either but it is what it is lol! I'm not sure I'm following you about the book? Am I missing something? ( I usually do lol) Merry Merry xo!
Wolf Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 8:12 AM
Beautiful refrain and beautiful poem, Crystol, and congratulations on POTD.
Woods Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 11:49 AM
Thank you Gershon! Merry Merry xoxo
mysore Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 7:10 AM
Congratulations on POTD honor dear poet. Cheers!!!
Woods Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 11:48 AM
Cheers!! Tysm!! Merry Merry! Xoxo!
Goldsmith Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 6:56 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a blessed day with your win....................
Woods Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 11:39 AM
Thanks my friend, Paula! Merry Merry! Xoxo!
One Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 5:54 AM
A beautiful poem with lovely sentiments.. Congratulations on POTD.. Well deserving.
Woods Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 11:39 AM
Tysm SO! Merry Merry! Xoxo!
Alex Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 4:04 AM
"When every hand is held None can go stay" - A very valuable Christmas tiding to the humanity today. Congratulations!
Woods Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 11:37 AM
I think so too Christuraj... what an unusual and lovely name! What does it mean? Merry Merry xoxo!
Trestrail Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 3:33 AM
Full of Christmas spirit. Girl, you bring ya ukulele and I’ll bring my pan flute and let’s go wassailing. A lovely verse. Congrats on POTD.
Woods Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 11:35 AM
Awe thanks Keith! Pan flute, huh? I knew you were super cool! ;) <3 I only figured out the definition of wassailing last year! Lol ty for the encouragement! Merry Merry! Xoxo!
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December 8, 2024 at 3:15 AM
Crystol, a beautiful poem and message, congratulations on POTD.
Woods Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 11:33 AM
Tysm Tania! Merry Merry! Xoxo!
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December 8, 2024 at 2:50 AM
Wonderful poetry Crystol, all we need for Christmas is peace on earth and the joining of hands all over the world. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
Woods Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 11:33 AM
Thank you! Merry Merry! Xoxo!
Jones Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 2:05 AM
“When every hand is held None can go astray The whole world is at peace On this Christmas Day” what a beautiful lyric! Wonderfully written full of the reason for the season! Great job Crystal congratulations on your potd honor!
Woods Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 11:30 AM
Oh tysm Karen! It definitely feels like an honor to me! Ty for your sentiments! Merry Merry! Xoxo!
Cunningham Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 1:20 AM
Congratulations to you on the honour of POTD Crystol. Hope you have a happy and peaceful Christmas. Tom
Woods Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 11:29 AM
Ty Tom! It's feels like such an honor to receive potd! Merry Merry! Xo
Williams Avatar
December 6, 2024 at 10:11 PM
Beauiful lyrical poem Crystol - we all wish the whole world to be at peace for all time. Merry Christmas in advance. Hugs
Woods Avatar
December 7, 2024 at 10:10 AM
Thank you Maria! Rbay! Xo
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December 6, 2024 at 4:26 PM
Beautifully written Dear Crystol and your fifth stanza is so true. Smiles & Hugs to you Sweet poet :-) A Fav for me
Woods Avatar
December 6, 2024 at 6:11 PM
Oh tysm! I'm feeling the love this Christmas! Xoxo
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